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Tymez In Mind
IP: 3EC9 2F38
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...838#post1081838
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...895#post1081895 TYMEZ IN MIND Chorus: livin through da lifez so many find that da hopless mindz we spare bare no pride sanctified by my liez, rectified my rise keep my back 2 da wind an da tymez in mind verse 1: itz rough sometimez, so many murderz -n- various crimes signed off as nothin more than a thorn in so many sidez can we shine through da darkness, heartless and departed lost hope in our fatherz regaurdless we roll in dis uncharted world as morderz, marked off as dead from da fuckin womb jaded for multiple ages, ultimatly hated 4rm da cradle 2 da tomb but keep ya head up, i know ur fed up but therez another day wake 2 a betta chance 2 advance out of this hell, so dont stray from da road dat u chose, hold on and dont fold 2 dese demonz keep dreamin, they never wanted u 2 breath in da air of freedom stay wit hope an faith even though u dont have a dime in pocket, no one can stop us if ya keep da tymez in mind chorus x2 Verse 2: To all my niggaz in da pen willin death, doin 25 2 Lyfe i know itz lonely in ya cell, got no homies black or white ready 2 die cause it could b ur day, playin wit da big boiz fought ur way through the flames but the pain was a decoy hoisted above, no luv from cowardz all doin a lyfe sentence an no trustin dese felonz, thought ur freindz were depentent but in da end de were all snitchez, bitchez left ya in stitchez out on bail lookin 4 a livin only 2 find urself in public lynchinz no place 2 find peace, cause da idea itself has been decieced many have shed tearz as de watched family pass in da street lookin 4 da space 2 breath, itz a crooked world stay tryin stay defient 2 da violence and keep da tymes in ya mindz chorus 2x Verse 3: dis ones a shout out 2 all da single workin mommas 2 all da devoted men raisin de kidz right as fathers in da projectz itz rough around da edgez but amazin kidz r first an poverty stricken women bond 2 raise em chase'in our painz wit 40 ounces, some say were cursed facin termination in da worst, lookin up 2 God 4rm a hurst iz it da way dat we live or does God just fuckin hate us why should we be forgived, this iz da way he made us born sinnerz tryin 2 live up 2 da title of a god damn saint at da rate now therez no time left for us to clean our slate did da dirt -n- now itz time 2 pay, a price 4 my many crimez da pain an sufferin in my eyez iz reflected through da tymez chorus 3x
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dont take me off im gettin 3 linkz
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IP: E7CB E3DC
homie u dont need 3 links ne moreson...u only allowed to post 1 topic up tho, but newayz bout ur drop...that was sum pretty ill shit 4 a newbie...shit ive been in here 4 awhile but istill can drop sumtin as good as that, newayz ur structure was good, vocab was fire n so was wordplay son, i like this drop a lot..keep doin ur thang son
Peace oh n if u got time can u peep my lil freestyle n give me sumfeedback
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IP: DD10 0DFF
This was alright i thought...you improved a lot since your last piece i read i think, good job....structure in this was good.....your flow in this was good through out i thought, it stayed on point through the whole thing....probably could have used a little better multies...but overall it was alright...keep at it.
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