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01-12-04, 11:44 PM
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Annoying Ho's
IP: 9353 C22A
I know all of you have had mint girlfriends that give a great lay, but a week into the realtionship you start to realize that bitch is annoying. Its happened to me anyways. But what you do after that is Dump that bitch on the side of the road where she cant get too your crib, just make sure you get the one last lay.
Check it out... Either this bitch is crazy, or shes naturaly blonde, Just stop talkin, cause of that Im actually fond, Im emberassed walkin when I see people we know, If only this bitch had cancer, I could legally grow, Datin retards your answer, cause your equally slow, Lock the door on the whore then frequently flow, And constantly this bitch will see me closing the door, Only way she gettin in is wit her cloths on the floor, This bitch makin me wierd, cant drink when im sober, If Im gone for a week you best be thinkin its over, Fuckin Bitches. |
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01-12-04, 11:57 PM
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IP: 8232 A2A8
that shit was hot
good word play and soo true you spit bout somthing u wer used too and it showed alot wen i read it i could tell you wer annoyed overall a great piece id say Try to return the favor with some feed back http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106420
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01-13-04, 12:32 AM
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IP: 340D 8B8F
Yeah this was a good piece...kinda short but i liked it though....your structure in this was nice....you had good flow in this, it stayed on point....you had some nice multies in this piece, i liked that....i can relate to these things here, cause i write about that stuff too lol, but yeah this was a good piece, enjoyed the read...keep at it.
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01-13-04, 01:17 AM
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feed
IP: 6A84 2A26
alright spit, i feel ya tho on the topic heh.. (check out my I hate bitchs keystyle open mic found in my sig), anyways. this piece was pretty short and i think u could of went into more detail about some shit but other than that it was ok, btw thx for droppin feed on my tribulations piece
peace
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~?~?~?~?~?~~?~?~?~?~?~? If ya get the chance Drop some Feedback on these drops:<br> <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=815041#post815041">I hate bitchs keystyle</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=85355">Aint no drug got a hold of me</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=88860">No Love</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=90057">Rules of the Game</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=92570">Dirty Hippie</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=92613">R.I.P Crossroads</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=92798">Learn about it</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=986562#post986562">Valet Parking [keystyle]</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=104102">Tribulations</a>. <br> <br><hr> <a href="http://www.geocities.com/lulong420/handbook.html">Handbook to all thats fun"> |
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