The time will undeniably elapse
keeps passing so itll also colapse
The two things are so adjacent
but know theres no replacement
so I always try to comprehend
but my mind tries again to amend
what the hell is the point of livin?
damn, I thought that was a given
majority of the population fade
but if the majoroties also jade
then why the hell do I care
do I sit there with a blank stare?
got a headache but i dont want immediate relief
I just want ease in a belief thats free to keep
am I thinking too much or losing my sanity?
but for me, a sane state of mind isnt primary
So as apprehension goes through my mind, I still waste time
It does not matter to rhyme but that is just my foreign incline...
My feelings will doubtably change but still I find it strange that I feel locked in a cage
locked in a cage by time, yet afraid so I rhyme about a craze as I proggress through my age...

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interesting, I got the message, that you were thinking bout what's the point of life or someting along those lines, we've all been, i've thought bout it once or twice, maybe i got the wrong message i dunno, but overrall, it's was pretty good, nice vocab, flow was aight, wasn't as long as last one so i read it all this time haha, anyway, keep droppin

peace

thanx for the reply, ill post up what i was thinkin when i made this poem after a couple more replies...

-GG-

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uppin, i made sure to give sum replies to yall. how bout sum other ppl return the favor?

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