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Old 01-13-04, 11:07 PM   #1
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Check this battle verse

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From a quick 10-line battle against Skandalz18 in Front Lines
...still waiting for the dude to show, so I figured I'd get some feedback.

here goes:

I think it's about time for this lame's-ass-to get-ripped-up.
Skandalz? Damn. Were you named-after-a strip-club,
You bitch thug? Now you scared to go straight-up
And get "ate-up" like we both hit two treys and a lay-up?
Yo wait-up, son. Let me give you a breather.
Cuz you'll need it once I beat you damn near to a seizure,
Then ease-ya on top of a stretcher and treat-ya
Just to keep-ya living life with Vanilla Sky features.
Or should I bleed-ya, leave-ya lie in a pool?-Skandalz
"Couldn't see Wormz" if he was a vet takin stool-samples.

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Old 01-14-04, 01:00 AM   #2
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come on, now...
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Old 01-15-04, 02:14 PM   #3
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uh....hello?
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Old 01-15-04, 02:27 PM   #4
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..You should post this on the battle..dumbass!
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Old 01-15-04, 02:27 PM   #5
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by the way...shit was wack!
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Old 01-15-04, 02:32 PM   #6
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..You should post this on the battle..dumbass!


He explained that at the top....
You've got the right ideas for a battle but need to elevate badly....thats all I gotta say
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