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Old 01-14-04, 06:17 AM   #16
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Old 01-14-04, 06:25 AM   #17
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good piece, a lil short, but nonetheless good, structure was great it flowed good.. umm nothin i could really say bad cept u could of went into more detail about some things and made it longer.. but other than that good job.
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Old 01-14-04, 11:32 AM   #18
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Yo i felt that! structure needs a lil work but i like the wordplay.

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Old 01-14-04, 05:39 PM   #19
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