You had good flow, but lacked in the vocab section. You could have also brought some emotion into the lyrics. You spit some part of real life, and the other is somthing you dont understand. I know from my own personal experience. I liked the wordplay in both verses. You had an intresting rhyme scheme, thats a big plus. It just didnt grab my full attention like it should have. Dont take this wrong though, you put down a nice drop. You also have elevated alot since I remember seeing your flows. Good work... 7.5 / 10

( PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND CHECK THE FLOW IN MY SIG, APPRICIATED )

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