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01-18-04, 07:29 PM
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vote seven
not that much hard hitting shit..but was way better thatn jay novas verse..only thing in jays verse that was ok was the name seven loss shit he said..ok personal used plenty of times..but ya ass needs to write more shit...  |
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01-18-04, 07:52 PM
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IP: C687 0D6C
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Punches-7 Meta-7 Multi-7 Structure-7 Flow-7 Closer-Jay Overal-7 7 basicall took this shti without even trying. Jay your shit is really good, keep it on even lines and don't use caps like that, get the strucure right and you could be really good.
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01-18-04, 10:03 PM
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Half Lyricist/Half King
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IP: 399E F0FD
uppin' x4 please vote on this shit people, please vote<VOTE ON THIS BATTLE IF U VIEW THIS BATTLE< PLEASE VOTE UPPIN' x4
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01-18-04, 11:15 PM
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shit se7en. what happened? i seen you better than this
truly disappointed dawg. but you seem honest. you still take this one. but shit man, dont think its an easy win cause theyre noobs. next time it could be a chrit imager. you took it on metas and punches. other guys punches were ok. but se7en just takes the cake. personal-se7en punches-se7en creativity-se7en Nova keep elevatin Nook vs Redeye Nook vds Autopsy Nook vs Nastradamous need these voted on ASAP. thanks peeps... |
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01-18-04, 11:27 PM
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Half Lyricist/Half King
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uppin' this battle for the last time, please vote on this shit people, PLEASE VOTE ON IT< PLEASE VOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ****** *
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01-18-04, 11:58 PM
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Jay - Your verse was to simplistic. There wernt any punches in there, or anyones that brought effect that is. The rhyme scheme was horrible, that structure was just choppy. It was just a bad verse, its a battle... Not a wanna be G Unit Session...
Elevate... Seven - Your verse wasnt as good as a couple you droped befor. Almost all punches were weak. You had the right idea hommie, just word them a little better. Your working on creativity I see. Your structure was straight, and you stuck with a regular rhyme scheme. It was an alright verse, just need to work on the effect of your punches... Vote - Se7en
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