Fuck y'all
and da shit you say
trippins back
to prove your all gay
pussy ass faggots that never got laid
fronted some rock and never got paid
well what i meant too say
is i now gotta little baby girl
and to me shes day whole fuckin world
every day i get on my knees to pray
to say how lucky i am
to look into her eyes
only for her I would fucking die
this isn't a lie i'd do anything to get by
with a shirt on her back and a home to go too
workin three jobs and I still go to school
from onlookers eyes this just ain't cool
from criminal to dad
Used 2 be bad
smokin a rock
totin a glock

this is for al my ellow fathers

As a fellow father...

I commend you loving your daughter and trying to better yourself for her.

Way to man up.

As a writer, though...

You kinda suck.

Very simple format, no wordplay...

No metas, not even a good flow.

Great message, horrible delivery.

But keep at it...

Peace

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that was bullshit elevate man
everything about that verse was wack