Brethan got this shit..decent battle between the both of you..Bret got this with better punches..wordplayed..like the implied..and punches..Danksta verse was average..well..a little below average..the dashes was gay..and that ren from michigan..was.umm..well..it didint make sense..and thats how your whole verse was...both of you elevate..

my vote/brethren

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...215#post1106215
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ayo close battle! really really close! i was expectin more na'sayin? but i'ma have to vote for Brethren . . his punches hit hella harder.. dope shit! i can't vote yet . . my bad fellaz! easy!

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dan got this but a littel stronger punches better structuer,better flow..
my vote-DANN

danksta - wack structure..........flow fell off due to ya structure........vocab was ok........some of the multis were pretty tight.........wordplay could have been better, but still aight........opener sucked........closer was ok.......i was feelin some of ya punches.........no real good personals.......

brethen - pretty good structure........flow was ok........vocab was pretty tight..........i was feelin most of ya multis.......wordplay was pretty ill.........ya opener was nice.......closer was ok..........most of ya punches hit hard........good personals......

conclusion - brethen takes this in wordplay, better opener, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote....

VOTE - BRETHEN

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108159

much appreciated..........

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whoaaa.......very one sided
brethen takez it in every category........
punches: b...hit harder....
flow: b...smoother....n eazier 2 follow......
structure:......none
vote: brethen
good battle
props 2 both
hit dis battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699

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flow - brethen
metaphors - brethen
wordplay - danksta
personals - danksta
overall - brethen

close battle. nice work both.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623