Jesus Christ,
Why The Fuck Do I Try . .
I`m Not Perfect
At Being The Perfect Kind Of Guy . .
And It's Not Purpose
That I Have to Sit Here And Lie
So Fuck It- Listen
I`m A Failure To Life . .
But Who Fucking Cares,
Not You Not I . .
& I`m Sure If I Had A Tear To Shed
I'd Cry . .
But I Can't, Give Me A Minute
I Know You Dont Give A Fuck
But Listen . . Then it. . .
I Know You Want Me To Cry A River . .
. . So You Can Drown Me In It ..
But I`m Missin You Right . .
I Know You Don't Want To Hear This . .
But Who Fucking Cares, Shit
I'm Missing You In My Life . .
But Who Fuckin Cares, Bitch . .

Fuck if it sucks, I`m audio, done this out of boredom

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nice line with the cry a river and drown me in it. nice post

haha, read the first lines and knew u were audio. I will give you my honest opinion. For a text piece, it sux. But now if it were an audio, I could see sumthin pretty good comin along der. Got the whole kinda Eminem Image "Fuk life, bla bla bla". Well, atleast ya tried, turn it into an audio.

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Kool piece....interesting.......nice post..........

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i agree for a text peice it aint too good... aint gonna bother explaining cos youll probably already know... but i suppose you did this to a beat.. and would probably go well if i knew it... so what else can i say... i could see it expanding to a decent verse for open, but a the minute it jus isnt there....