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screemin 4 more
IP: 051A C701
alrite dis is me 1st rap
i no its probly crap wots up wid u me nigger wot u stupid shud of pulled da trigger ![]() but u didnt no i was fukin ur whore ![]() fort u wud of herd her beggin n screemin 4 more see look now ur on da pill all because u missed 1 kill most of ya neva herd my shit o well duz it look as if im carin just a tiny bit take da piss ill shoot da shit out of u ![]() thn get ur mom 2 eat da fukin shit right out of u this song is not about u just 1 silly little rap but dont worry there will be more dan that ![]() |
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Banned
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IP: FF92 7263
needs more work on vocab and structure but good flow
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New to RB
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IP: 051A C701
o well ill get betta
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IP: 4287 3F49
yup throw some creativity in tha thang.Most people sound simplistic their first time (except for me i came out the womb ill i was battling the other sperm for survival)
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Free Agent.
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IP: 1A62 B95E
Bad.
You Needa Work On Everything, But You Gotta Start Somewhere...You Need To Have Creativity And Flow, You Had None WhatSoEver. Lengthen Your LInes, But Dont Have Them Strechted!!!! Overall- 2/10, Dont Worry, You'll Get Better....I Think..
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Run! ![]() The Return..
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Hmmm...This might be garbage of the week....
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