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01-22-04, 09:06 PM
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tryin'....
IP: 6A02 D0E5
what the fuck was you thinkin
listenin in on me when im speakin u just done fucked up ya weekend look at me again and youll be permenatly sleepin cuz imma giva ya what i got nevermind, all i need is one shot ya got an X on ya forehead cuz it marks the spot so here meet me and this is my glock mother fucker i spit on u ya prolly wish ya had the flu i can see ya scared knowin what im bout to do to you just turn around and walk away before my homies roll up and spray just tryin' to do somethin decent i cant write that emotional stuff like some ppl can so just tell me and ya think...peace |
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01-22-04, 09:13 PM
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IP: CD76 910C
for some one who can write emotional peices this was actually alright man...ya structure could use some Work but That Will Come as u see more Open Mics...ya flow was alright...if ya add some multis in there it would be really nice....If ya can could ya LCheck out My Open Mic In My sig and return the Favour Man....Keep Elevaten....PeacE....
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