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01-23-04, 12:33 AM
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That's Right...I'm White
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Writer's Block
IP: 6AE9 8857
what's on my mind, i dunno do you? i'm confused
i can't rhyme, what to do...my mind's been used it's all blank, my mind is empty to the tilt it's like i tipped my head over and my brains spilt man i got writer's block, i know that's what i got i'm in the light, but i'm not in the spot? man this shit, isn't it a little confusing i pick up a pen, but i ain't using um yeh i dunno freestyle type poetic type thing...... yeh peace |
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01-23-04, 02:59 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: A560 AB42
meh....not really feeling....
not any umph to it... but if u see the beauty in it then all power to you... thats all that matters...peace |
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01-23-04, 03:07 AM
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There Is No Spoon
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IP: 843C 2CD1
This wasnt really poetic at all.
Sorry to say....
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im da sikkest u cant fuk witt me nicca 
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01-23-04, 07:31 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
not poetic at all u should have posted in open mic,
still its ok,work on vocab though best 2 lines "it's all blank, my mind is empty to the tilt it's like i tipped my head over and my brains spilt" hit up my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195 |
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01-23-04, 05:02 PM
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That's Right...I'm White
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IP: F770 BF33
meh, what can ya do,
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