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01-24-04, 12:00 PM
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Straight Savage.
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10 Lines Sitting in my Mind
IP: 8BEC CACE
Money buys Power, Givin People Respect Never Found my Footing, Just A Misstep Destruction Shows, Jesus Comes to Lay the Law Because When He Walks...Its San Andrea's Fault I'm Confused over My Sudden Thoughts, Clearly But I Really can't Stand The True Lies Near Me Make Me Sit Down, Bear the Pain, Grit My Teeth We Have wannabe Gangsta's, trying to Be Unique Twins Stood together, Two Others Made 'Em Fall It Showed the Voice of America, Desperation was Our Call
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01-24-04, 12:18 PM
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
i quite liked this, short, but compact... it had a nice flow going and was to the point... would have been better if it was a bit longer, but still.. nice..... what more can i say....
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01-24-04, 12:19 PM
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
Thank You, Sir
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01-24-04, 12:39 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: C1DA C961
..short and sweet~~message was delivered with impact..very good flow..could've been a great piece if longer?..it's still a joyful read..(skiddz threaten to kill me....)
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