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No cause he doesn't have enough posts to vote he needs 100, so it's 2-1 my favour, PLEASE VOTE IF U VIEW THIS PLEASE VOTE, LAST UPPIN' x5, PLEASE VOTE IF U VIEW THIS

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

I thouhgt seven took this battle better punhces an metas not badd tho u both came a bit weak..bt 7 had better punhces so ill give him my vote.......

He took it in all cateorios shit was way better then other cat..

Vote- 7

Hit this up.pls..Cuz i hit ya shit up..u no honestly..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487

verse by seven
My lyrics eat Xplicit like piranhas, with alot of laughter and drama
Have him more excited then when I showed my dick to his momma
A question Mark, so I keep fucking up and pressin’ sparks
Hit this guy so hard, he’ll light up like a Christmas tree in the dark
Your smoked more than a pack of cigarettes, on a store rack
Your trash and wack, that’s how come I’ll say your made from scratch
Rap is fiction not fact, atleast for you, I can say that has to be true
Never seen you battle before, and I can tell I rap better than you do
I flew a few punchlines, in this battle on the front page of frontlines
His experience is reading a poem, so now he says he has done rhymes
You can never laugh at me, damn dawg it will always be so sad to see
After this win I get, I’ll put it in my sig so you can always stay mad at me
So juss take the loss, your juss a bitch who had to pay the final cost
I got you frozen in your place more than your face if you was Jack Frost
---vote down---
1-2lines--good opener nice meta
3-4lines--great pounch nice meta
5-6lines--blah weak pounch
7-8lines--blah nuthing really special
9-10lines--ok pounches
11-12lines--lol good pounchline
13-14lines--lol good closer with pounch and meta
--not that great of a verse--


verse by xplicit

hey middle weight who u foolin? what message u sendin?//
I said 10-20 lines but from yah class I could make it *seven*//
blabberin poet exlodin his bullshit and whinin bout a crew//
Ur dirt like garbage needs it and garbage needs u to//
I can be a mentor an idol juss ma image can shine a light//
since god dont like u dont mean u gotta ruin a site//
the presence of u makes me feel like I aint even gotta worry//
since u "middle weight" still means u aint goin no where in a hurry//
have u felt the strike of lightning or heart shatterin heat?//
cuz it juss took u off ur seat and its danglin u by the feet//
all is said and done beef is settled on the streets B//
ur a half breed I'm pure blood, it would take more then ur words to reach me//
I'm lookin at u in pure disgust I'm sayin this sadly//
u might as well bow down cuz this juss made me ur daddy//
--vote down--
1-2lines--good pounch included personal
3-4lines--weak pounchline
5-6lines--nuthing special here
7-8lines-- not that great of a pounch
9-10lines--good meta and pounch but not that hard though
11-12lines--blah
13-14lines--lol good pounch

--conclusion--
my vote goes to 7 for a better stronger verse although it was weak i really expected more from you...categorias that seven takes is pounches,metas,

pretty weak battle

--168--

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I think se7en easisly took this one.....his punches were way harder he had good personals...a lil too much filller there son work on that shit but other than that not bad...might wanna up your vocab...expand to new horizions.....Xplicit maybye you should of dropped your best shit i just wasn't feeling it..i didn't really like your personals and that is basically waht lost it for you sorry dog se7en takes this one....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109696