i'll pick you up and puncture a hole through you like a voodoo doll
blood jus falls downstream and gushs out as if it were Niagra Falls
goods metas not much on the punchs though....
I spit bars dat Golden Corral and Shoney's haven't even probably carried
shoveling dirt on your computer it's your final resting place to get buried
^nice line....intrestin first line ok punch in the second line
your pad and pen nigga go ahead jus set it on da ground
even though i'm on my computer I'm still gonna shut it down
^like it good wordplay...get more personal though.....
my lyrics have you running around in circles like a dog chasing it's tail
home boi in yo mind keep thinking i'm a test to ace and you gonna fail
^alright still ain't used his name.....oh well good meta...
your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for sensation to feel
^hard for sensaion to feel?...intresting wordplay.....
Cashville is Trashville mainly straight trash from your trashed lyrics
your armored fortification I've cut through and lyrically pierced it
^ok line....armor peirced pretty basic.....
all your vital organs and signs are left all in da open
swallowing my lyrics are horespills keeping you choking
^okey dokey.......another meta.....
AK have unloaded da 47 leaving you mentally affected
you'll reign forever and ever on "Rap Battles Rejected"
^good punch....good close...overall an Ok verse...


First off let me tell you that shit was so wack
Your flows a damn joke that dont even make me laugh
^alright punch there...not bad
I know your ass is broke, so your coming after Cash
Ill leave you smoked like a fat pound of hash
^its a weak meta......
Bite the curb you nerd, Ill murder you fast In fact
your already on my nerves, your verse is like a rash
^ok metas are there......
the worst that Ive ever heard, you dont deserve a chance
So I flip 2 birds, one for you and your 2 only fans
^thiis is just......nothing...filler.....
Man I cant stand not even a gram of your ass
Ak-mixa, what the fuck kinda tag is that
^a weak personal.....
your into dicksucking and flapping your trap
You aint getting nothing, no votes, not ever one clap
^simplistic.........rhyme bigger words...
Your a fag and wack, go home and do the math
it's like attack of the clones each track you rap
^meh heard it b4 not bad though
your a down south drone, lost without a map
better stick to flippin burgers and serving fries jack
^well theres a personal...if he's from the south good punch...sorry though your verse was not as good as ak-mixas...close battle guys

UPPIN FOR VOTES BITCHES............too many cats sleepin on villin........im just playing games with you punk asses right now...............

how bout some votes the villins way.........damn

Uppin for more votes..........come on guys, more villinz way

ak had a few nice punches...his rhymes weren't too great but he had some witty lines...the golden caral and shoneys line was dope....vocab was decent....multis didn't really exist...but had some good punches...

cashvillin just had a really weak verse..no punches...multis weren't there..rhymes were weak...no vocab really....in my opinion he got ripped...

vote- Ak Mixa

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alright, guess I'm ending this battle...

cash, wasn't bad.. could've been alot better. and u needed it to be better to take this battle from ak. Honestly, ak just had you in mostly all the catagories I can think of. His personals hit you the most, punches, very creative and original verse. I liked it alot. cash like I said, not bad.. just keep at it.

vote- ak

ak thanks for the feedback -- guess u could say I was fuckin around in that battle. was trying to rhyme everything for the hell of it. Probably should not have done it in a battle vs daz, haha.

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Ight both came weak but ak got this in my eyes
punches- Both had iight punches Cash, yers were played and werent that hard once so ever,Ak Came harder and put more creativity into his punches,
Wordplay- Cash yers was very played, not creative at all, it was just pretty basic,Ak, Ight use of meta's not really the best wordplay but it was better than Cash's...
flow- Both had ight flows , wenrent really tight but they went with the structure..
Personals- Both had some good personal and somebad ones, Cash YErs were again very basic and played...You need to be more creative. some of your personals were jus worded bad, ak some of yer personals were just run ons..
Structure- Both structures were descent........Nothing really special here

Ight battle...no beef.. keep elevating
V/Ak-mixa

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