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01-30-04, 11:06 PM
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Middle Weight
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One Rock(Dedicated to Relationships)
IP: 2DF8 44D6
One rock
Broken in two One side shatters to pieces, the other remains strong Until it is thrown back in the garden.... |
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02-01-04, 12:21 AM
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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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IP: EC0B 84C7
I'm not feeling this.
I dunno why either. Generally, I'm one who will be first to say "Less is more." But that's not to say this wasn't good. Logically, I should be feeling this. It strips away all the unneccessary stuff, and just spits out a metaphor of simplicity. I dunno, maybe I'm not feeling it because I have the flu. But either way, keep dropping. ~Islam~ |
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02-02-04, 08:26 PM
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IP: B815 C7BC
Fairly simple. Does the job through a strong enough metaphor. Though on it's own as it is, it can seem a bit weak. Emphasis on can.
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02-03-04, 03:29 PM
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Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 4427 B15C
really i like how you decided to show this. it was a nice metaphor, thou i too think it would be more effectful if there were more, but this is still great in its own way. shows a good and real umm lesson you oculd call it in a very simple, but different way.
~Tera~ DONT HATE
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~ Nyla ~ keep singing in heaven |
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