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02-03-04, 04:59 PM
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Damn man this shit was ill..........some of the best lines ive seen ina minute..........it was so detailed.....everything was there.......you kept me well interested..........an you had me glued throughout thats hard for peeps to do that........Props, Respect........Hit my latest up i always appreciate your honest feedback.........
I Bought Her Flowers Today http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111616 |
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02-03-04, 05:01 PM
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Baron gimma a piece of ur nuts!! they almost swallowed by all =( =( =(
o.O Upper.
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02-03-04, 05:03 PM
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lmfao
niggers be tripping offa my words FUCK TIGER WOODS, THERE'S TIGERS IN THE HOOD O_O |
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02-03-04, 05:06 PM
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O.o Word nigga MAINSTREAM flow is good.
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02-03-04, 05:17 PM
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I GOT THAT MAINSTREAM FLOW FOOOOOOOOOOL
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02-03-04, 05:32 PM
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Britney.. shud be raped..word is bond?..
Up.
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02-03-04, 06:28 PM
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Id sign up for it.
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02-03-04, 06:43 PM
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nice peice....creativity was amazing and a great topic. The wordplay and structure were great and it flowed verty well. A dropoff tho was that it was hard to get the meaning in one read...but thats not bad i guess. Overall this was a great read. Hit my peice up if you can
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111741
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02-04-04, 07:31 PM
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I cant hit it up, my penis hurts.
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02-04-04, 07:42 PM
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this was cool in the sense that the entire thing was one big metaphor, which is really cool. The imagery was great, the writer's voice was alright, and the storytelling was wicked. I didn't like some of you word choice for the rhyming, but I would still bust a nut in this piece's eyes, cause it was that dope. The only thing I think you need to work on...is adding a point to your writing...making something stand out that even an idiot can see. Because once you can illustrate something so simple with the fuckalicious skills you possess, I will give you oral pleasure.
Peace in the middle east!
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02-04-04, 08:14 PM
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Lmao ..
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02-05-04, 01:00 PM
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upping over that faggot Penskills that posted like eight verses up .. what the fuck is w. that?
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