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02-05-04, 04:44 AM
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Timeless vs Guesswhoesback
IP: 8633 BD8F
10-12 lines
no hate votes etc.. blind spits check in .... |
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02-05-04, 06:19 AM
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IP: 5376 152B
In...Here is my verse:
I'm defined as the lyrical mind, bringin mirical lines/ While you what? Waiting for luck to give ya a boost up?/ Your flow is tight, like the dress you're wearin'/ When ya speak on the mic, It can't stand the words he's hearin'/ I don't care If ya words are filthy, Ima still Kill thee/ My words make ya feel guilty[That he sucks]Admit it, I'm ill,G/ Bitch you prolly will attack with useless tactics in ya crap-spit/ I ain't in the Matrix still i'll do a back-flip till I dodge ya whack, attack-shit/ Bitch I was ready to kill ya when you were born in ya momma womb/ As soon as you slipped out her pussy I greeted ya with doom/ Apart from burying her cord I buried you too in the tomb/ |
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02-05-04, 07:22 AM
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IP: 8633 BD8F
Put this kid down for his nap. Administer 'drugs' with adult-force
Now he's got so many 'holes in his body' he could open a-'golf-course' You always wished you'd get big, GRANTED! Here's a fat filled sandwich. Cause with rhymes that 'flow' THAT 'slow', you'll NEVER reach an 'experts bandwidth' dog your text and flow also be shit, i have the skillz you lack you aint hot, and even ronald Mc donald knows ya aint a big mac I'ma do this shit Passive because you left ya self open to get ya Ass Kicked... Cuz VNE came from UR ANUS so we always knew you dropped Whack Shit Time relapse from my precise rapz just to back-stab these ex-com-rad's GWB's The kinda emcee who would pull out his DICK in hand to hand combat there its over and another wanabie, newbie, packed and smacked so one more line for ya lil bitch,when you logg off guesswho'wontbe' back (sorry it took so long, i had writers block, thats why its so shit) |
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02-05-04, 08:20 AM
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IP: 8633 BD8F
uppin............................................. .....
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02-05-04, 09:39 AM
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IP: E6FB FD16
Hey, I'm a newb but just to start I'll challenge you both!
Not bad by the way you both were aieght. |
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02-05-04, 10:18 AM
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"The Eleete"
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IP: FAD9 BD2A
Nice............Guesswhosback your flow was way basic not bad but the punches werent there.....Timless your verse had some nice wordplay an flow was all there....very nice.......
there its over and another wanabie, newbie, packed and smacked so one more line for ya lil bitch,when you logg off guesswho'wontbe' back<-- Nice finisher! Good Job! Vote Timeless |
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02-05-04, 11:03 AM
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IP: 40D6 EBC3
Wow... Im impressed...
Timeless that finisher was cool... Could of been worded better... But still the best bar of battle... Props... Rest of your verse was normal standard for you... Keep it up... Good flow... Punches... Structure... Jus dont capital your words... Makes it look ugly... And harder to read... Jus keep it nice n simple until you find your own structure that suits you... Guess... Dont colour your verse in man... This is not a colouring competition... You need to elevate... Dont talk about yourself so much... Attempt punches... Be creative... Weak verse from you... v/ Timeless... Pz... |
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02-05-04, 11:17 AM
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Best In The Game
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IP: 3A1D AC66
WOW we got a newb that is pretty good.....timeless nice flow u had good punches and i was feelin that ending.............the break down........
flow:timLess had a good flow fell off track acouple of time byt he fixed it...guess whos back yo u had no good flow u need to find words ta flow with other words better.... punches:TIME u had some nice punches<Guesswhosback u had a couple of good punches but TIME came thru harder with his,u need to elevate just alittle bit structuer:well guess whos back had good structuer<TIME your was ightt but his was just a little better PERSONALS:didnt realy see any good personals... my vote:timeless |
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02-05-04, 11:40 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 8633 BD8F
uppin more........................................
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02-05-04, 11:49 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: A52B 5C9C
This was a pretty gud battle
flow: they both had a nice flow going on but Timeless had more gud rhymes going on than guess cuz I felt he had some gud wordplay Timeless had really gud punches I didn't really saw gud punches in guess but guess had a nice structure....need to elevateee... Personals i didn't see any so they both have to ùake work to make sum gud personals After all i must say that both need to elevate but my vote goes to Timeless Vote on this thx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111593
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 Wathup Bitches ready for my spit Wins: Lust (5-1) Bettws (5-0) Rappin' Master (5-1) Baz187 (5-0) Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3) Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time) Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time) |
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02-05-04, 11:55 AM
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IP: 8633 BD8F
uppin for 1 more vote..............................
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02-05-04, 12:19 PM
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#12
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IP: 5376 152B
Shit Timeline I underestimated ya, I guess that adds one more to your wins.
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02-05-04, 03:09 PM
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Fuck yo couch
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IP: 3493 8649
Punches: Timeless, better overall punches, not great punches from Guess. The golf course line was a decent punch
Wordplay: Timeless, the big mac line was the best wordplay in this battle. No wordplay from Guess. Multis: Guess, guess's verse was mainly multis, a lot better flow than Timeless. Personals: Neither, no personals from either Opener: Timeless, opened with a decent punch, Guess didn't open with anything respectable. Closer: Neither, both were ultra wack, Guess's didn't make sense, said something about coming out of his mom's womb, and Timeless's was the least creactive personal you could've come up with. Vote - Timeless Make creative punches, elevate both. Time relapse from my precise rapz just to back-stab these ex-com-rad's GWB's The kinda emcee who would pull out his DICK in hand to hand combat Timeless's best bar. I'm defined as the lyrical mind, bringin mirical lines/ While you what? Waiting for luck to give ya a boost up?/ Guess's best bar.
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