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Old 02-09-04, 07:23 PM   #1
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Tha Girl...

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Wrote this up quick, not really for anything except to express myself....~1

You astound me with your grace and beauty.
How can your appearence and attitude be so great that you obsess me with your image?
I can't stand to not think about you, you're with me everywhere i go.
Your presence silences me, for I cannot talk when im around you.
I'm not shy, or afraid, I'm just waiting for the right time.
i love the way you smile at me, and cheer me up when i am down.
This poem 9s all for you.
I'm not gonna hold anything back as my mind and tounge lyrically unwind.
Could this be love?
The Way you make me feel?
The feeling is too strong to explain on paper.
It is impossible to try to explain the very thing which I love and desire most.
I can't control myself when i am in your presence.
I am a robot around you.
Someone else is inside me and controlling me.
I cannot say waht i want to say to you when I love you this much.
I will love you as long as I live, even after my soul leaves earth.
You always Will Have a place in my heart.
I will always be reserved for you and no one will ever takes its place.
I love you...
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Old 02-09-04, 09:42 PM   #2
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i thin this came up wit tru emotions...shown thro...an thats the point of poetry to juz speak ya mind an put emotionz to papa...

esp liked:

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I'm not gonna hold anything back as my mind and tounge lyrically unwind.
Could this be love?
The Way you make me feel?
The feeling is too strong to explain on paper.


that right there is enough to sum it up...
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Old 02-09-04, 11:00 PM   #3
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thx fo the feedback appreciate it man. Up.

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