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Old 02-27-04, 11:54 AM   #1
Lil Rip
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you think you know crazy well you dont now me// i'll take a knife to a gun fight and put them all to sleep// look into my eyes and see no fear// i make mama's cry knees shake when i come nere// I'm lil rip so you better learn the name// got a heart of ice body intice wit flames// i'm badda and madda than any one can be// so try crack before you come tring me// cause i'm not the one to be mess wit// cause if you step you ass will get delt quick// i'm the type of nigga that will smoke and ride with a pump in my trunk 45 by my side// do or die// coming out busting slug // if you dont know i live the life of a thug// they call me lil rip because i rip track like i'll rip your heart of your back then snap like a twig// like ludacris// tell'n niggas move bitch// out my way// before i spray that ak//
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Old 02-28-04, 11:25 PM   #2
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rofl way to bite that "i bring a knife to a gun fight" off 36 Mafia, but since ur a homo newb, I wont report it...
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Old 03-31-04, 12:00 AM   #3
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i wasn't tring to bite idon't even like 36
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Old 03-31-04, 01:15 AM   #4
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everyone in rap has said that line...........

one love......

and its from the movie THE UNTOUCHABLES.......
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Old 03-31-04, 02:08 AM   #5
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Eh...This Was Ok.Some Played Concepts.Some Weak Lines.You Need To Work On Your Structure,Organization,And Your Flow Was Off Too.Using Metaphors And Having A Bigger Vocab Helps Out Too

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Old 03-31-04, 02:08 AM   #6
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work on ur vocab and dont write in paragraph form
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