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Banned: Cheating
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lil rip
IP: BFBB F25A
you think you know crazy well you dont now me// i'll take a knife to a gun fight and put them all to sleep// look into my eyes and see no fear// i make mama's cry knees shake when i come nere// I'm lil rip so you better learn the name// got a heart of ice body intice wit flames// i'm badda and madda than any one can be// so try crack before you come tring me// cause i'm not the one to be mess wit// cause if you step you ass will get delt quick// i'm the type of nigga that will smoke and ride with a pump in my trunk 45 by my side// do or die// coming out busting slug // if you dont know i live the life of a thug// they call me lil rip because i rip track like i'll rip your heart of your back then snap like a twig// like ludacris// tell'n niggas move bitch// out my way// before i spray that ak//
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Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 27B1 49F3
rofl way to bite that "i bring a knife to a gun fight" off 36 Mafia, but since ur a homo newb, I wont report it...
fag
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1B38 DB3F
i wasn't tring to bite idon't even like 36
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....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: 0ABC 464B
everyone in rap has said that line...........
one love...... and its from the movie THE UNTOUCHABLES....... |
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Beyond Comprehention
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IP: CDBE 76F0
Eh...This Was Ok.Some Played Concepts.Some Weak Lines.You Need To Work On Your Structure,Organization,And Your Flow Was Off Too.Using Metaphors And Having A Bigger Vocab Helps Out Too
2/10
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 525D FF37
work on ur vocab and dont write in paragraph form
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