now its dagreatest vs Juss_Blaze/
aint no competition i'ma tear his ass/
after this first verse its simple as that/
on the floor i'll lay you ass flat/
i'm lyrically blessed on the mic/
i dont use bullets/
i kill people with rhymes/
dont even think about it/
i'll slaughter you before you put up a fight/
by the time you come up with something/
half way decent as mine/
sorry you just ran outta time/
you cant rap to save your life/
dont try to hide it/
this might be the last thing you do/
cos you messing wit someone thats criminal minded/
like nas said "I'll embrace ya with nepalm/
"legs, chest, hair face gone"/
use you as the prime example/
why you shouldnt mess wit dagreatest da true don/
you feeling the heat/
all the way from London/
you should rename you name to name-biter/
call yourself Juss_Blaze/
you aint him from rocafella/
you get paid for being a cocksucka

uppin............................................. ...........

can someone tell me how my verse was, i just need to know if i'm improving or not

uppin............................................. .......

c'mon Juss_Blaze, u called me out, do your verse, i'm uppin for votes with or without your verse

oh for god sakes, someone atleast post something in here please

excuse me, im blowin up dog, this aint a bomb threat/
i got guns that beam you up, like you in Star Trek/
U steppin up all hard and talkin shit/
my guns so big that you think they shoot rocket ships/
go be a janitor, cuz you cant rep mikes/
your skill is non-existent, like your sex life/
you aint fukkin me up dog, maybe a next fight/
you? win this battle? maybe a next life/
you aint dagreatest,nigga you rhyme the softest/
my rhymes bad like i wrote them in the principal office/
your career was good, but now you just blew it/
i would say "kiss my ass," but nah, u might do it/
u sayin i aint the best. u call me a liar?/
im blowin up the mic like a 10 ton bomb/
then i slap yo faggot ass like im Elton John/
im in a rap university with a full scholarship/
you aint on my level, you in community colleges/
so next time u step and wanna cuss my rhymes/
i break your fukkin neck like Busta Rhymes/

i made a mistake. read this instead

excuse me, im blowin up dog, this aint a bomb threat/
i got guns that beam you up, like you in Star Trek/
U steppin up all hard and talkin shit/
my guns so big that you think they shoot rocket ships/
go be a janitor, cuz you cant rep mikes/
your skill is non-existent, like your sex life/
you aint fukkin me up dog, maybe a next fight/
you? win this battle? maybe a next life/
you aint dagreatest,nigga you rhyme the softest/
my rhymes bad like i wrote them in the principal office/
your career was good, but now you just blew it/
i would say "kiss my ass," but nah, u might do it/
u sayin i aint the best. u call me a liar?/
i spit hot shit, like great balls of fire/
im blowin up the mic like a 10 ton bomb/
then i slap yo faggot ass like im Elton John/
im in a rap university with a full scholarship/
you aint on my level, you in community colleges/
so next time u step and wanna cuss my rhymes/
i break your fukkin neck like Busta Rhymes/

uppin............................................. ..........

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yea juss i think gott this B/c he had harder punch but dagreatest verse was god but not hard enough but juss blaze was try'n to hard wit them wack punches i'm off that
Vote=juss blaze


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damn that was sick. dagreatest you were straight. juss blaze was better.
he came hard . nice metas and everything.

vote-juss blaze

This battle wans't too good.....dagreatest....I think that you should extend your bars..........and also work on your flow............because your verse looked elementary.......1.5/10

Juss Blaze......your verse wasn't great....but it was better................juss work on your flow also............and the rest will follow............4/10

juss blaze, go this
because he killed dagreatest with his punclines
meta and simi-juss blaze
vocab-juss blaze
flow- juss blaze
multi's -juss blaze


juss blaze was just better on this one,
dagreatest, you need to wrk on getting better punchlines

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