Okay. Any amount of lines.
No DR, no Hate votes, No Crew votes.
Stay true

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well i dont mind goin first this sh!t kinda excite me\
like when u in high school and u cop a fresh pair a nikes\
i know y guyvo wanted me to spit first\
cause he aint know if i was aight or the type a nigga to put u in a hearse\
well too bad 4 u not the type to loose over here\
i just ask that u dont start jockin tha flow like underwear\
im sure u gotta few smart lines to spew\
but b4 u get the chance imma leave u cooked like stew\
nobody want it i say that in my first rap\
cause i smell the b!tch in u u probably like to make ya ass clap\
yeah i know the flow is str8 retarded\
and u cant bite it cause its gary paytonish....closely gaurded\
thats y its easy 4 me to pull ya card on the first take\
cause ya style is soft as birthday cake\
so try it if u wanna cmon dawg step to me\
and find ya self pissed on worse than toilet seats

good shit i liked it cauze it was funny and had good punches in it hope you vote on my battle when he drops for me heres a link guyver4mk

I find it easier than speakin to take the piss/
Y u think u can hate and try to diss/
I kung-fu you with my shaolin fist/
An your rhymes I don't even need to try to twist/
Make you get the jist, fuck you up and break ya wankin wrist/
I don't know you yet I already hate you/
I'ma make my dent then come through/
The only way I see to defeat you/
would be to remove these two addidas an beat you/
So You've been told once and I'll repeat it again/
Like a faggot, you take it up the rear from men/
I hope you don't think I'm gona fuck you up one more 'gain/
I'm jus here to help you train ya mind and maybe find/
The thing you think you got called rhyme up ya behind/
You speak out ya ass, you smokin too much grass/
Coz there ain't no time like the present/
To clean up ya act and improve ya behaviour/
Take ya bare balls and shave 'em, remove ya skin/
I hope you now start to begin, to realise you ain't got nothin/
But weak ass rhymes and a two bit imaginary crimes/
So this time I'ma end ya shit with a frigid rhyme/
Cos u don't like girls, its men that you find/
Always up ya behind, with a no smokin sign/

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wassup this is tru2it if u think i roasted this nigga vote 4 me

uppin for votes in this mutha fucker!!

holla back people!

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breakdown for guyver4mk:

flow: the flow alright in spots you lose it though like lines 3,4,5,6 all over the place overall though not bad 6/10

volcab:nothing special but it's not over simple so alright 6/10

punchespen disses nothing that really hurt best line was, "Make you get the jist, fuck you up and break ya wankin wrist/" i'd give you 5/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for tru2it:

flow:same problem as your oppenent your first couple of bars were all over the place if you want big bars split them up with some multis still 6/10

volcab:better then your oppenent but still nothing really special keep trying here 7/10

punches:best line,"but b4 u get the chance imma leave u cooked like stew\" you did throw some alright punches were your oppenent didn't so you get the edge here 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--tru2it

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

overall
flow-2
funnyness-g4
tightness-2
pounches-2
no hate

v tru2it

hope you retern the vote

good battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For both of u

V Tru2it

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aight peep this mk you got this one but just by alil.....

mk: that was betta than most of your battles....so keep on spitten thats the only way you will get betta....punches were alrite..meta4s were alrite...structure was good..multies need a lil work but coo..all in all. 6/10

tru: you was coo...you need a lil more practice..you could of had this one but you were just had some immature raps...they were kinda childish...you need betta meta4s, punches, and vocab...all in all5/10

vote:mk

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I think it was a pretty even battle, all catagories were pretty even to me, but I think tru2it's punches were more creative. And I also add a point for going first.

guyver4mk you shit was clean and all but the punches were weak, if you had even like 2 strong punches at the end and maybe a personal or two I would've gave it to you.

Vote - tru2it

Cool man.
Uppin for more votes in this.

Holla back!

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What up tho Uppin for votes in this biaatch!!!!!!!!!

Nice battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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