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Old 03-24-04, 09:56 AM   #1
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Dear Dad

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eres A Piece Straight From The Heart.... I Know U Gonna Like It... If U Dont...u Shoudnt Be Calling Yourself A Rapper Coz U Obviously Cant Reckonise Skill.... ,,.....aight Ere It Goes..................
Ok My Mother Was Dumb To Have Me So Young, But Your The Scum Who Shot His Cum Then Done A Fucking Run/. U Left My Mum Hung Drawn And Quarterd. Gave Birth To A Son Whom Grew Up More Like A Daughter/ Because U Werent Around A Spent Most Ma Early Days. With Ma Sis Clowning Around Acting Girlie Ways/ When Most Boys My Age Played Armie. Id Be Cuddling Barnie Or Playing Fucking Barbie/ At Primary School I Hardly Had Any Homies. And The Freinds A Had Played With Ma Little Pony/ If Only U Stayed I Mighten Of Been So Lonley. U Could Of Taught Me How To Make Freinds With Male Cronnies/ I Cant Beleive Id Sit By The Phone Hopeing Youd Phone Me. How The Fuck Could U Jus Throw Me Away After Youve Known Me/ God U Mus Be One Phoney Excuse Of A Man. & What I Cant Understand Is Why My Mam Even Got With U Damm/ Id Love To Throw A Right Hand And Knock U From Where U Stand. Into Cukoo Land, When We Meet Im Gonna Demand/ U Expand Beyond Your Normal Self Centered Thoughts. Notice I Aint Mentiond Your Name Thats Coz U Enter The Courts/..... chourus[/u
Dear Dad That A Never Had. It Makes Me Sad To Think How Bad. I Wanna Stab.[u] Both Your Eyes Out/
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Old 03-24-04, 10:04 AM   #2
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Yo Peeps Im Sorry It Ends Abrubtly. Jus I Aint Had Time To Finish It Off...... But Any Comments On The First Verse And Any Helpful Advice On The Much Needed Second Would Be Gratefully Appreiciated... R1ff Raff
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Old 03-25-04, 04:28 AM   #3
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I thought it was hot so you should post the rest of it dog........



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Old 03-25-04, 12:10 PM   #4
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Yeah, Nice 1. I"ll Finish It Asap. Its Jus When Uve Made A Verse That Good Its Hard To Make The Second Of The Same Calibre But Im Working On It
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