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04-07-04, 02:34 PM
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Is This a Proper Haiku???
IP: 0934 DA79
This is my struggle
The lyrics clash within me I must release them
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Just lurkin the shadows..... Been 'Round Since '01 Fuccaaa |
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04-07-04, 03:01 PM
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IP: 9EA9 3EDF
Seems fine to me: 5,7, and 5 syllables in 3 units. You went 5,7,5 so I dont see a problem. Some people do go 5, 6, 5 sometimes though.
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