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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
AFTERWORD 3 37.50%
$$UPREME 5 62.50%
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Old 04-14-04, 11:11 AM   #16
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I was feelin both playas there!!

$$upreme was comin out with some solid punches and i liked the whole round 1 2 3 thing that u had goin on.
AfterWord had a better structured rap and countered all the punches supreme threw at him. I especially liked how he used $$upreme's name against him.

I'm gonna have to give this battle 2 AfterWord!!
 
Old 04-14-04, 06:16 PM   #17
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$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ $$$$$$
 
Old 04-14-04, 06:27 PM   #18
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Alright AfterWord.. You Had Me Lost In Some Of Your Bars/Lines ....! I Wasnt Really Quite Fallowing Your Verse Was Off-Balance' .. The Structure Was Off' .. Wich Practically Threw Your Whole Verse Off' .. Individually Speaking You Had.. Some Good Punches Though!!' I Give That To You!!' ... Alright Look

Break Down...

Check AfterWords Lines:'

i may just jack-son, like im Samuel on dat Shaft-shit///
i flow with a pas-sion, and it will get-drastic,
as my airborne gasses make ya whole Class-Sick////

^Ver Nice WordPlay And ... Nice Punches' ...


so dude, take them $$ out of ya name,
u are no-where near being close to Ma$on Betha/////
so just let-us( lettuce) trend settas, rejoice and relish(2x), in our victory, and you'll never catch-up( ketchup), b/c u rhyme so pitifully/////

^^But What The Fuck' Got To Keep It Basic...!!!



on the real yur not supreme, yur just suffering,
from multiple delusional episodes//
i kick exceptional concepts ya know,
while u flow like Money Mike( Next Friday) got a hold of ya testicles!

^Again Keep It Basic...!!

But I Went With $$UPREME On This Shit Just Because Basically He Had The Better Flow, Structure, Verse, And His Shit Was Easier To Follow' .. Rather Then.. Like Going On An Easter Egg Hunt.. Looking For!! "AfterWords' Verse And Shit" It Was All Over The Place

Vote: $$UPREME
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Old 04-14-04, 07:28 PM   #19
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aight

well supreme good flow and structure i was really feeling ur lines...
punchlines and personals were really good especially BEEF*
$$UPREME WILL EAT AFTERWORD'S QUICKER THEN A CANNIBAL WITH BIG TEETH*... i was really feeling that line....

AfterWord had good flow and structure aswell but i wasn't really feeling ur lines....... but ur punchlines and personals weren't as strong and thats what lost u the battle....

Winner: Supreme
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Old 04-14-04, 08:32 PM   #20
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yo now we got a lil sumtin goin here
lets get a couple more votes too close this out yall
we will return da favor
peace
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Old 04-15-04, 03:16 PM   #21
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Uppin 4 Votes.....................
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
 
Old 04-15-04, 04:35 PM   #22
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this battle was pretty good ....they had really different styles...i like a couple of after words punches but not many....he didn't have the flow or nice vocab or structure that supreme had althoguh he had a couple more personals....

supreme
vocab-8
personals-6
punches-7
flow-9
extras-9 (cause i enjoyed the shit)

afterwords
vocab-7
personals-8
punches-7.5
flow-5
extras-8


vote supreme
 
 


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