Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
|
View Poll Results: Who Won | |||
BlackThief | 2 | 66.67% | |
Fatal LyrikzZ | 1 | 33.33% | |
Voters: 3. You may not vote on this poll |
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
04-17-04, 01:51 AM | #1 | |
Flyweight
|
Black Theif..VS..Fatal LyrikzZ
IP: 6C7A 3231
Alright You Know Rules Spit Ahead..
__________________
ReKorD WinS 0 LossEs 1 Ko'S 1 K'Oed |
|
04-17-04, 02:07 AM | #2 | |
Black Thief still...
|
IP: 11B3 CEBC
aiight is this another battle or just another roast//
just another reason why people shit on on tha West Coast// And if you think you really gonna win son...who taught ya// I'll leave cats at tha crime scene like "who shot ya?"// Another cat from Cali who thiink he "hella" hot// but u can get popped too...so u can be just like Pac// cause California may know how to party/// but in tha dirty dirty all we do is ride wit shottys// Fatal lyrics, or self inflicted wounds// fuck killin u son...I'll shove ya back into tha womb.....a bloody tomb...RIP |
|
04-17-04, 02:17 AM | #3 | |
Flyweight
|
IP: 6C7A 3231
I Leave This Boy Bruised Black And Blue.|
Finally You Posted But Like A Library Ya Post Was Overdue..| Inflicting Wounds The Only Thing You Inflict Is Cancer And Diabetes.| Next Time I Shouldnt Battle Him Cause He Causin Diseases.| He Askin In Front Lines Can I Come Out And Play.| And The Only Trigger He Pulled Was A Bottle Of Cleaning Spray.| What Makes Him Have Confidence He Cant Even Spell.| He Had A CORDLESS Phone But Shit Still He FELL.| Last Line Have A Nice Day While I Inflict Venom In Ya Skin.| He Tangled Like A ~Violin~ Within His Brain He Cant ~WIN~
__________________
ReKorD WinS 0 LossEs 1 Ko'S 1 K'Oed |
|
04-17-04, 02:18 AM | #4 | |
Flyweight
|
IP: 6C7A 3231
Alright Please Vote On This POLL I Will Rturn FAVA
__________________
ReKorD WinS 0 LossEs 1 Ko'S 1 K'Oed |
|
04-17-04, 02:19 AM | #5 | |
Black Thief still...
|
IP: 11B3 CEBC
u forgot to add a poll....damn add a poll man
|
|
04-17-04, 02:22 AM | #6 | |
Flyweight
|
IP: 6C7A 3231
There LOl...
__________________
ReKorD WinS 0 LossEs 1 Ko'S 1 K'Oed |
|
04-17-04, 02:28 AM | #7 | |
Ya mom massages my nuts
|
IP: 3240 794D
ah'ight this was a decent battle..you both dropped hard an came wit dat shit, ah'ight...Black u had good punches, and good flow, but no multies, personals,or wordplay, but a solid verse wit decent vocab, u need to elevate son
Fatal...you didn't really have any punches cuz ya setups were messed up, let me explain I Leave This Boy Bruised Black And Blue.| Finally You Posted But Like A Library Ya Post Was Overdue..| The first line(set up) has nothing to do wit the punchline(2nd line) but you had good flow an good vocab, no multies, or wordplay, kinda the same as black, keep elevatin' son Punches: black Personal: tie Wordplay: tie Flow: tie opener: tie closer: tie Vote: black, no disrespect fatal holla back http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119204
__________________
Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
|
04-17-04, 02:30 AM | #8 | |
Black Thief still...
|
IP: 11B3 CEBC
fatal....why u got tha poll closin at 2:22??!!?!!??
|
|
04-17-04, 02:32 AM | #9 | |
retired.
|
IP: 75F5 BDD1
yo.. this is supposed to be a battle, not a poll.
__________________
RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!
|
|
04-17-04, 02:44 AM | #10 | |
The Epitome Of Greatness
|
IP: 3240 794D
aiight black u came aiight i think u coulda done better wasnt much to ya verse
quotable line "Fatal lyrics, or self inflicted wounds// fuck killin u son...I'll shove ya back into tha womb.....a bloody tomb" ^^ that was a nice closer and probably ya best line..i think u could have done better tho not many personals/punches no multis structure lacked sometimes... fatal came nice too i would have expected more from you in this battle but u was still nice... quotable line "He Askin In Front Lines Can I Come Out And Play.| And The Only Trigger He Pulled Was A Bottle Of Cleaning Spray" ^^ haha nice bar feelin it..u had a couple good multis some nice wordplay couple punches/personals.. all in all nice battle vote : fatal lyrikzz |
|
04-17-04, 02:48 AM | #11 | |
Flyweight
|
IP: 6C7A 3231
i messesd up....
__________________
ReKorD WinS 0 LossEs 1 Ko'S 1 K'Oed |
|
04-17-04, 02:49 AM | #12 | |
Flyweight
|
IP: 6C7A 3231
Alright Ill make New one And Just Copy Paste Alright ???
__________________
ReKorD WinS 0 LossEs 1 Ko'S 1 K'Oed |
|
04-17-04, 02:53 AM | #13 | |
Black Thief still...
|
IP: 11B3 CEBC
aiight
preciate that...everyone can u plz vote again?Uno... |
|
04-17-04, 03:04 PM | #14 | |
Created New Account
|
IP: C1F6 3A36
this wasnt one of tha best battles i've seen and in all honesty both spits were pretty weak. neither one of u were throwin hard punches but u both did have good flow and structure. black ure overall performance was better than fatal cuz ure flow was better and ure punches were harder.
fatal that was a really weak performance, u had ok flow and sum gud vocabs but that was all. neither of u had decent wordplay or personals, u both need 2 elevate ure shit or u wont go far vote= black vote on my battles 2 franchiZe 1-3 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 4-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 mic-wrecker 0-0 franchiZe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119505 franchiZe 0-0 creaTivitie http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119662 |
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|