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04-19-04, 09:15 AM | #1 | |||||||
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These Times
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from before when time defined it necessary to climb over others
essence of life smothered, fighting erupted even between brothers the powers that be, with an iron hold on the majority mentally free thinking slowly sinking into the depths of history you see statistically, mortality rates rising every year governments fear, that people could realise the conspiracies here those that shed tears living in poverty, fight to survive whilst others immigrate and the state gives them a better life ignoring british rights, some of our own live in building sites Fat cats get excessive bonuses and this causes strife Some people work hard and never get anywhere, feel despair, Others subtract reality, feelings not there devoid of care, its true some bring upon themselves calamity But as I pen these words someone is trying to damage me for I speak unspoken truths, propagate my message to the youth The next step is to uncover the darkness and bring proof..
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04-19-04, 01:18 PM | #2 | |||||||
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good post man im impressed. good word play, very strong vocab, all makes sense theres no dead spots where it looked like u were strugglin. im impressed by the overall rhyme scheme/style u brought out. good work
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04-20-04, 05:29 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Thanx
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04-20-04, 10:52 AM | #4 | |||||
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yeah...it was a nice lil flow...but you need to use more multis...and put more metas in ur stuff...overall it was iite
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04-21-04, 07:35 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 22ED 1BB0
Aight cool
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