no biting feeding recycling playing
due tonight at midnight 8-10 lines

check

if u so dope then y u make a callout yet affraid to spit first
prolly cos u gotta search for a bit verse so u can hit worse
silly rabbit your shit aint working cos there no trix in this game
your wack as fuck cos your lines bout as original as your name
u shoulda just backed off i dunno y u even check inta my thread
cos u was fucked b4 it started like brittany when newly wed
bitch its best u shut your mouth n just dont get inta me
cos 9 months 4 u were born i gave your mom a dope dalivery
keystyle whatever.. spit your shit

im fixin-ta-smack this kid thats clearly spittin-it-wack
I mean damn kid u "suck at rappin" hope ya stickin-ta-track(check his profile)

I make-it-better plus this kids as fake-as-pleather
Bitch ass get "ripped up quicker" than a break-up-letter

Beatin this joke of a hoax without puttin up any effort
Its like my lines givin "paper cuts" cuz damn my text hurts

i aim-for-ya-throat with neck shots that make this lame-nigga-choke
Kid your not even "real" a fuckin fable-at-most

mista-cool DOPE sent you straight from bitch-ta-fool
For real give up rappin homie and stick-to-school

That was a hot battle. U both went hard shit was real. Ideum had better flow, but delivery's was alright tho. Punches went hard onboth sides but i think ideum took that too. structure was good too. overall i liked both but im votin ideum

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ppfffff nigga head back to the moon..... 1-0 idEum

i got to go with ideum he came a lil hard nice battle
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121292

Dang this shit was tuff... but im gonna go wit dopedelivary only because he had the punches and flow...

flow=dope
punches=dope
wordplay=ideum
originality=ideum
vote=dope

I prefer punches and flow over wordplay and originality.. u feel

that makes it 1-1

bm316 ya vote dont count brah...........

idEum
flow:7/10
vocab:6/10
originality:6/10
punches:7/10

DopeDelivary
flow:6/10
vocab:6/10
originality:7/10
punches:5/10

over all this was a short but sweet battle and i'm going with .....
vote=idEum

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