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no dick ridin

Yo i've just started, gonna spit rymes on ur head just landed/
these lyrics are eatin vital orgains inside, got your heart stuck in a microwave saved for burning for l8ter/
plz you don't see me, now leave, im gonna chop your words up like a shredder/
your treading on thin ice, with your stinkin fat ass, you'll fall down fast crashing/
these lyrics can't be submitted to hold back, it'll reinstall your brain, put your mind in a world o,f fucked/
spittin this shit for you it's dissin you've just missed your oppotunitry, try again next time/
the rymes have livened me up, and im anxiously trying to make you give up/
I get four stones thrown at you, ti'll i start seeing some action from my reaction/
watching you bleeding on some bigger stones, then think this an't good enough, throw your ass onto a enormous cliff, dropped head first watchin u die immediatly/
This battle has out spoken you, revealed that you don't have a clue about rap
start some other type of shit, but don't expect me to listen/

Yo J--Drop yo verse i wanna see dis battle........ plus im postin in everythang so i can get like 100 Postzzz

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

Fine Mind dat shit was CORNY like corn on da cob an shit LMAO! i dont think dat shit even rhymed...Ive read CAt in da hat books dat rhymed mo den dat

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

Game over nigga, you just lost anyway.

This nigga aint make it, his 'cuts' is fake//
But my words chop him up faster than "Helicopter Blades"//
One by one, your punches swing and hit air//
I ain't no bone crusher, but 'I aint scared"//
But as for me........im patiently waiting//
Have my words "solve" your problems like Algebraic Equations//
I got this fool shook, he ain't know what to do//
I won't waste the rest of my rhymes when I beat you in two//
Dudes can talk all this bull about killin man//
But they can get 'killed in battle' like "Pat Tillman"//(RIP)


Im done.

damn j-da took this battle

fine-your lines were way too long.....u need to shorten them up......and u didnt really even rhyme in your verse.......u need to fix your structure

j-da-u took this easy u started off whack but u picked it up......personally i didnt like your closer i thought it was grimey....but it was very creative....u had some ok punches.....u took this easily.....but u need to work on your consistancy

J I am sorry I cant vote yet but when i can i will be sure to you for this battle. You said some good shit.

e.coil- Yeah that line wuz kinda Grimey, Im thinkin about just erasing that one outta my rhyme book. And the reason that I came a lil weak is cause, I put out three battle calls and only one got answered, mostly the one that I ain't think no one was gonna answer to. But good looking.

^^^^^^^^^uppin for votes, we need some voting to go on for this battle.
Im trying to close the battle.