RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
Reload this Page ??ANY QUESTIONS?? (feeed baccck please)
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 05-11-04, 06:02 PM   #1
SpokenBluntly
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
 
Posts: 280
Joined: May 2004
From: Baton Rouge,LOUISIANA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
??ANY QUESTIONS?? (feeed baccck please)
IP: 9636 A27E


Step into my saftey deposit cuz I'm postive that life is a negative image/
The remrents of *HATE* got me prepared mentally like a post season *scrimmage*//1
*IM NOT THE BEST ONE OF MY KIND?* then revoke my mind and prove me wrong/
YOU PROLONG your opinion *but still haven't called me out~or wrote a hate song*//2
It's obvious~*IM HOLDING UR ATTENTION LIKE A HOSTAGE*~BLACK and spreading blood with pleasure like *BONDAGE*~*OH U TRYING TO CATCH MY TALENT *UR FEET PICKING UP MILEAGE*~MY RHYMES MAKE CLAY AIKEN *STEP OUT OF THE CLOSET*//3 (YOU CAN"T STOP IT)
IM ya LOLI POP chick *freezing~ya~crystals*/
Federal COP type shit *greasing~da~Pistals*//4
PAINT THE PICTURE OF THE PERSONA OF A FEMALE RIDDLA/
GOT THE TALENT TO MAKE U SHIVER~AND UR ARM HAIRS QUIVER//5
Got the voice to make water ripple~got the face to put a stand to ya man's pickle/
VERY INFLUENTIAL make da pad tickle da pencil~got you youngin's FRUSTRATED and poppin ya Pimples/6

SALUTATIONS~BE PREPARED CUZ BLUNTLY IS RAISING THE BAR FOR *ELEVATION*/
STARTING MY OWN REVELATIONS~PASSING ALL EXSPECTATIONS/
GOT A FLOW THAT'S IN HEAVY ROTATION AND VERY BLAITANT/
EVEN AS U READ IM DOWN IN MY BASEMENT~WRITTING NEW CREATIONS~YOUR TITLES ARE NOT SET IN CONCRETE *I AM UR REPLACEMENT*//7


GET AT ME!! SPOKENBLUNTLY (KISS DA SKY)
__________________
BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....
Send a message via MSN to SpokenBluntly Send a message via Yahoo to SpokenBluntly   Reply With Quote
Old 05-11-04, 08:44 PM   #2
SpokenBluntly
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
 
Posts: 280
Joined: May 2004
From: Baton Rouge,LOUISIANA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 9636 A27E

*im Uppin You*

Sb
__________________
BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....
Send a message via MSN to SpokenBluntly Send a message via Yahoo to SpokenBluntly   Reply With Quote
Old 05-11-04, 09:13 PM   #3
LadyLyrical
New to RB
 
LadyLyrical's Avatar
 
Posts: 85
Joined: May 2004
From: {New York}
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: C1DA C961

lol some of this i thought was directed at a certain person or group of people lol....this is the best thing ive seen from a female on this site so you definetly holding it down spoken do your thing....ma i liked the vocab flow...it was real na mean stay up 1
Send a message via Yahoo to LadyLyrical   Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 06:41 AM   #4
SpokenBluntly
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
 
Posts: 280
Joined: May 2004
From: Baton Rouge,LOUISIANA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 64EB 73A1

lol ayo ma u know i stay wit subliminals in my rhymes...they'll figure it out...Yo thanks for da ups...STILLUPPIN *tootles*

SBizlle
__________________
BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....
Send a message via MSN to SpokenBluntly Send a message via Yahoo to SpokenBluntly   Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 08:53 AM   #5
young beezy
Light Weight
 
Posts: 204
Joined: Apr 2004
From: fo' shizzle in tha dirty but reppin LB New J
Status: Offline
Text Record: 1-2
IP: 40B2 4A8C

lady lyrical only has 17 post so of course she hasnt seen any femcees better than u, spokenbluntly stay up home girl
__________________
beezy crew fo life
1 love live life
2 the fullest

HOLLA @YA GIRL

beezy crew from life to death
n when I die put the colors across my chest
  Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 09:07 AM   #6
SpokenBluntly
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
 
Posts: 280
Joined: May 2004
From: Baton Rouge,LOUISIANA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: D99F 4756

thanks for da props breezy it's appreciated...*UPPIN*

SB
__________________
BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....
Send a message via MSN to SpokenBluntly Send a message via Yahoo to SpokenBluntly   Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 11:44 AM   #7
*Tay.G*SinCity*
Light Weight
 
*Tay.G*SinCity*'s Avatar
 
Posts: 247
Joined: May 2004
From: Las Vegas, NV
Status: Offline
Text Record: 9-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: D70D A460

Yo, no lie, dat was nice. Keep doin ya thang gurl.
__________________
______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______


"Play Da Game Nigga, Never Let Da Game Play You..."

______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______

PLZ VOTE ON MY BATTLES!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?p=1339209#post1339209

______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______


<=<=<=Net Record... 62-2-0=>=>=>
<=<=<=RB Record.... 7-0-0=>=>=>
  Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 04:27 PM   #8
SpokenBluntly
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
 
Posts: 280
Joined: May 2004
From: Baton Rouge,LOUISIANA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 7EF7 B90D

thanks for da props...tay (by the way u gots a creative lil name there..im feeling it) UPPIN*

SBIZZLE
__________________
BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....
Send a message via MSN to SpokenBluntly Send a message via Yahoo to SpokenBluntly   Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 05:25 PM   #9
shamira
Flyweight
 
shamira's Avatar
 
Posts: 110
Joined: May 2004
From: Sparkle Land
Status: Offline
Text Record: 3-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 9E88 B351

what's up (ma), u know what im gonna say...lol, the shit was tight...stay up!!!!!!
__________________
<CENTER>





Adroit(ko)
Dalyricalvillain(5-4)
LyRiKaL19(Ko)
blackmon(ko)
Eclapt(DQ)
Send a message via AIM to shamira Send a message via Yahoo to shamira   Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 05:27 PM   #10
broadstreetbuli
New to RB
 
Posts: 9
Joined: May 2004
From: 216 cle
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 9C95 CE55

yo thas hot right there best line (ya feet pickin up mileage) nice punchline do u
__________________
tha buli's in tha fukkin buildin
  Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 05:33 PM   #11
SpokenBluntly
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
 
Posts: 280
Joined: May 2004
From: Baton Rouge,LOUISIANA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 7EF7 B90D

yoo lol u a bulli!!! taken it back to middle school lol yo thanks for da props pa *UPPIN*

SB
__________________
BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....
Send a message via MSN to SpokenBluntly Send a message via Yahoo to SpokenBluntly   Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-04, 07:19 PM   #12
LadyLyrical
New to RB
 
LadyLyrical's Avatar
 
Posts: 85
Joined: May 2004
From: {New York}
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 85B1 5859

beezy i have 17 posts but i be lookin through this site all the time just havent posted much on the part also that i have no tyme lately to be up here all the tyme but this by far has been the best ive seen so thank you very much and 1
Send a message via Yahoo to LadyLyrical   Reply With Quote
Old 05-13-04, 06:51 AM   #13
SpokenBluntly
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
 
Posts: 280
Joined: May 2004
From: Baton Rouge,LOUISIANA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 2-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 5B70 4D71

lol getting these girls ATTENTION (as usual though lol) AYO IM UPPIN THIS *ONE*

sb
__________________
BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....
Send a message via MSN to SpokenBluntly Send a message via Yahoo to SpokenBluntly   Reply With Quote
Old 05-13-04, 08:28 AM   #14
.::N-Sight::.
GrOwN aSs MaN
 
.::N-Sight::.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 995
Joined: Apr 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 4289 77F4

It's obvious~*IM HOLDING UR ATTENTION LIKE A HOSTAGE*~BLACK and spreading blood with pleasure like *BONDAGE*~*OH U TRYING TO CATCH MY TALENT *UR FEET PICKING UP MILEAGE*~MY RHYMES MAKE CLAY AIKEN *STEP OUT OF THE CLOSET*//3 (YOU CAN"T STOP IT)

^^^ dat was a nice run...sick

i liked this piece...flow worked, even with long-ish lines

rhyming was coo...more internal would help

slick wordplay

this was a good drop

1
  Reply With Quote
Reply

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes
Linear Mode Linear Mode

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:08 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.