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05-13-04, 05:22 PM
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Bone Anthem!*!
IP: 6C8E 5424
check it, i spit and fire in a hurst, I lyrically shoot as i burst, catching da only bitch i hit first, 4real i jump off drugs as i take da pill, feling ill while catching money in da air still, and i fink am goin crazy, seeing butterflies eating daisys, am just lazy, so i cant bust a move feeling da heat, i cant look homes, and i cant speak, tomorow a time where i gotta be dissin, hittin homies out class in my mc written, lyrics while taking a pill, and still shooting my piss on da toilet but am missin, laterz  |
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05-13-04, 05:25 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 6C8E 5424
i wud love feedback
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05-14-04, 05:28 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 6C8E 5424
no one?
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05-14-04, 05:36 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
It shows potential but I think you just need to keep writing right now--- it all comes with time.
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