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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
ATMOSPHERE 5 100.00%
fine mind 0 0%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 05-17-04, 05:13 PM   #1
HoPe
Above All Else
 
From: 6-5-0
fine mind Vs. Me

IP: EC0B 84C7

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10 lines max
no c/v unless it's honest
no d/r
no h/v
spit due 30 min. after check in...
No feeding off verses..
check in asap...
3-0 is KO

Battle closed by KO
-strobe
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Old 05-18-04, 04:14 AM   #2
lyrical distruction
This is my first post!
 
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From: UR MOMS HOUSE!!!!!@#
IP: DF7B C8F7

Atmousphere im gonna battle you again but this time doin it well/
so i'll start by sayin you suck like the lips on my ass ready to kiss/
dissing is my favourate thing, do absolutly anything for you to die thin/
better beat you quick, i'll break u up like jinggers, spreading my hate at you faggot/
your a human short of a brain, i'll cover you up n soon stain/
why the fuck am i to blame, when i told you your lyrics are to ova loaded/
of cum, full of shit and gung, im like a bee ready to sting, stick my ass into ya plunging, like my ass is pumping, lol./
i feed on your energy demolishing you quickly, like my raps sit on you like sum1 on a toilet shitting/
i'll burry you in snow, stop you from breathing sufficating/
kill your mum off the scene, jabbin a blade like i know what u did last summer/
transforming evil spirts into your sickened fairy tale story
watch you apprear on tv, lunge my hand pull you grabbing/
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Old 05-18-04, 08:28 PM   #3
HoPe
Above All Else
 
From: 6-5-0
IP: A982 3A6E

?????Man that took like 3 days to post???why did u take so long???haha..u pre-wrote so much.ahahahaha
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Old 05-19-04, 02:01 AM   #4
HoPe
Above All Else
 
From: 6-5-0
IP: EC0B 84C7

lolz..sorry i took so long also..I jst rememberd about this shyt like 5 minutes ago..so here's my 5 minutes of wackness..hahaha...imma ko this nigga!!!

Bitch, imma rip on u so easy imma make it look like a massacre//
I'll make ur ass feel more stupid den how all of da animals were//
Cuz of u there is finally a definition of stupid//
Wen i use my bod. ta get boys, this nigga still needs cupid//
This is gonna be da 3rd time that a newb gets wooped by a filipino//
Cuz i ain't even tryin, comapred to his rhymes i'm spittin like da El Nino//
Imma only use six bars and gonna beat this nigga easy//
Hahaha..I think this is gonna be his 13'th lost..yes niggas believe me//
Shyt!!He could be 1 foot from a nigga wit a gun and still would miss him//
Hahaha...this boy isn't from london, cuz this nigga spits like a britain//
Damn nigga, if rappin was a sin then you'd be hella sinnin//
So stop spit'n, if RB was all catholics then u'd be a discrase to all christians//

haha..good luck to u homiee..you'll need it
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Old 05-19-04, 02:04 AM   #5
KillaCamFlow
Most Wanted
 
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From: Rochester,New York
IP: 0CD4 8C79

Im gonna have to say Atmo won this the other guyt structure,Wordplay,Creativite and alot more was all of i think he needs to reread his verses before he puts them againist a rhyme

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Old 05-19-04, 10:16 PM   #6
shadow
bingo!
 
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
IP: AAF4 20CB

wow nice and wack battle evry1 loves those! naw just playin staright
fine mind : horrible structure
fair punches
ok flow
need work on punches and flow and a lot on that wackass struture
bestline: none
YOUR SHIT DIDNT RHYME LEAVE THIS SITE NOW AND DONT LOOK BACK!
OVERALL: *3.5*
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atmo:
hott spit nice flow good strutcure
fair punches
ok vocab
work on ya punches
nice spit though girl
bestline:
Bitch, imma rip on u so easy imma make it look like a massacre//
I'll make ur ass feel more stupid den how all of da animals were//
Nice opener
but slow your roll
dont get to cocky
aight
my vote atmospehere
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Old 05-19-04, 10:53 PM   #7
DFrost
Flyweight
 
From: NY
check it

IP: 9E83 C44F

atmosphere won this for rhyming, but the verse was a lot better than fines's anyway. fine, u gotta make every bar rhyme to get people to vote for you
 
 


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