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.Flows. 5 100.00%
Maku JaiiLiin 0 0%
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Old 05-18-04, 04:45 PM   #16
PoLiFicK
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close dis pleasse no contest here flows killed dis dude maku shit barley even rhymed shit was wack mann he need 2 elavate on da real shit was asss crackkk

flows

bestline-Nigga pay attention my flows seem like they leave ya with stitches....
Ground ya in ditches,He has no friends so he hang with goth bitches...


won already

worsteline-none

flows verse gets a 8/10

maku

bestine-none

worsteline-all

verse gets a 4/10 needs work

winner flows
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Old 05-18-04, 04:52 PM   #17
SpokenBluntly
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this was a very close battle for me :
FLows:..lol FLows
multies:ties
wordplay: ties
Creativity:flows
entertainment: Maku

FLows verse flowed better..the lines meshed and the mutlies tied wordplay could have been better but it was fya non the less ..v/flows *ONE*

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Old 05-18-04, 06:59 PM   #18
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Old 05-18-04, 07:43 PM   #19
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Flow not a bad spit nice punches. You started off hot and then near the middle it cooled down but picked up again near the end. Maku, you had nice flow and it was a pretty good verse but you had filler lines so it seemed

Ex. I crippled you with a glance, you’re scared? I’ll run for you//
If you kill me, I’ll escape from death, return and come for you//**

Not a very good line, your bars were short so was the whole style but anyways I give this battle to Flow cause his verse didnt' seem to fall short anywhere, complete punches full lines and nice flow.
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Old 05-18-04, 09:21 PM   #20
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flows-i love ur structure and ur wordplay, and the real deal

maku- good lines too many ad-libs, just break down ya shit and youll be fine

v=flows
 
 


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