Yall Can't See Ma Vision, You Aint No Optician...
Probably Think I Support Ur Decisions Cuz U Got Ma Vote Like Sum Politician/
Iam On A Mission To Stop Yall Bicthin' Cuz Thiz Site Got More Bicthes Than A Kicthen/
How U Know What I Feel?, Thiz Is Ma Pain Ma Struggle/ Dont Steal Or Burgle But Yall Wacthin Both Hands Like A Juggle/
Whats Up Man???....
Yall Like Poor Fire Marshalls Cuz U Aint Ready For Ma Flamez/
Ma Spits Struggle To Cacth Ur Attention like Wak Playstation Gamez/
Am I Lame?....
Hell Naw!...Ma Thoughts Could Rip A Diamond And Ma Selfesteam Higher Tha Da Pants On Simon*/
If Ma Thought Was Contagous Ma Spits Would Make Head Lines And Front Pages!/
If U Could Walk In Ma Shoes U Would Have Blisters/
Dawg Ive TURNED More Corners Than Twisters/
If U Was Me U Would Probably Run Fast And Become A Cheater(Cheatah!)/
Loose All Ya Money To A Parking Meter...
Just So You Could Rock A Spot Without Getting Shot/
Ive Been Ill Ask Ya Doc Or Get Me To Give Ur Door A Nock/

Maybe Am Mental, Yes!....But When I Got Than Pen In Hand I Know Iam Blest/
And Ma Vision Sick So Dont Try To Test




(*Simon Cowell...American Idol Judge)


Yall keep Saying I Got Bad Structure So I Thought I Would Concentrate On That In Thiz Vesre Holla....

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That Was St8 Flames Dawg! You Was FeLLiN That From Top To Finish!

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Yall Like Poor Fire Marshalls Cuz U Aint Ready For Ma Flamez

liked that^^^ nice creativity

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Hot ass opener:Yall Can't See Ma Vision, You Aint No Optician...
Probably Think I Support Ur Decisions Cuz U Got Ma Vote Like Sum Politician/
You were straight burning it up from the beginnin to the end. I liked that. Your flow was killin and had good punches. Holla back.

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damn dog that was a fucking hot ass verse damn im feelin that shit glad u got me to peep it

yea dats a nasty flow ive been keepin an eye on you and tay since yall came up in herrrre

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Hot Shit Fam..

Iam On A Mission To Stop Yall Bicthin' Cuz Thiz Site Got More Bicthes Than A Kicthen/

^^Couldn't Have Said It Any Better Myself.

Hell Naw!...Ma Thoughts Could Rip A Diamond And Ma Selfesteam Higher Tha Da Pants On Simon*/

^^lol. Creative Ass Line Right There Son. I Liked That Shit.

The Whole Verse Had Creativity And An Ill Flow. Keep It Up.

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Iam On A Mission To Stop Yall Bicthin' Cuz Thiz Site Got More Bicthes Than A Kicthen


lol was feelin that line there

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two and counting

Yeah I Was Feeling That Nice Constitent Flow............

Uppin Yall!!..

Keep Tha Criticism Coming.......

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Yea, Nice Drop. Used A Nice Flow. Just Expand Vocabulary And Make It Even Hotter. Pe@ce

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Like A Weightlifter In The Olympics - Bound To Be Lifting-Bars! - Snapshot

Newest Member Of L.S.U

init agreed, gd flow but if u extend ya vocab a bit to make it sound betta: Nuttink ta elevate all gd

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lickdacreamoff
_-_-*baby_gal*-_-_

pretty good but there were some parts that needed some elevation iight.......yo sup baby girl lol we meet again lol.........

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Hott As Per Usual Pimp, Nice To See Six Holdin It Down Here,Flow Was On Point
FourMost aka Verb