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Old 05-22-04, 11:05 PM   #1
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short keystyle need some feedback

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i'm demanding respect
i'll replace your chest with a gaping hole,
I'm in the ozone ready to spill my soul
goin out of control, i feel like my whole brain's
fallin out my skull,
who you callin insane?
i'll make you dissaper like david blain
like a dog i can smell fear,
Cmon pussy
let me see a tear
go home and cry to your moms,
i'll be waitin in you room holdin a bomb

uppin for feed back
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o.. I'll fuckin.. I'll..
I'll puke, eat it, and freak you (eww)
Battle? I'm too weeded to speak to
The only key that I see to defeat you
would be for me to remove these two Adidas and beat you
and force feed you 'em both, and on each feet is a cleat shoe
I'll lift you off your feet so fast with a roundhouse
you'll think I pulled the fuckin ground out from underneath you
....Em is sick ....just plain sick
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Old 05-22-04, 11:20 PM   #2
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ehh...pretty basic...nothin impressive....sorry but it wasnt good.....2/10.....only thing that u had was flow.....
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Old 05-23-04, 09:32 PM   #3
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^^^ i agree it was bad but tha rhythm was good
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Old 05-26-04, 02:01 PM   #4
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not to good but i guess it wasnt absolutley horrible either it gets a 4/10.....
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