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06-16-04, 11:52 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Gangsta
IP: A027 6DDB
Somebody being me thats hard to see
Ah nigga killing people for fun thats unlikely!! I sell hoes and I sell a packagez of mikies Cus I hate fonies and especially gruopies!! Thats why I can't picture me next to ah nigga He better hope I aint got a gun cus I'll surely pull da trigga!! Leave um on da ground fucked up and wastit If he's still alive then he better just face it!! Cus u know me man I explode and pop So if ah bitch says "No" I aint gonna stop!! Cus I flow sick with this Hip Hop Leave ah nigga at da drug deal still waitin for da drop!! |
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06-16-04, 12:32 PM | #2 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
it was ok but ur structure needs a lil mo touching up u'll get betta ova time
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06-16-04, 07:23 PM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
mmr was u talkin bout me in that kill for fun verse????
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06-16-04, 09:53 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: A3EA 639E
it'z was kid play but needs 2 b touched up a lil bit ight
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06-17-04, 05:01 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 5EA8 688F
killed the verse.......not too bad
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06-17-04, 09:35 AM | #6 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
same as everybody else it jus needs some work here and there but not so bad at all......
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06-17-04, 01:47 PM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
needs work & work on ur style & structure so u can improve on ur technique
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