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Old 06-16-04, 11:52 AM   #1
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Somebody being me thats hard to see
Ah nigga killing people for fun thats unlikely!!
I sell hoes and I sell a packagez of mikies
Cus I hate fonies and especially gruopies!!
Thats why I can't picture me next to ah nigga
He better hope I aint got a gun cus I'll surely pull da trigga!!
Leave um on da ground fucked up and wastit
If he's still alive then he better just face it!!
Cus u know me man I explode and pop
So if ah bitch says "No" I aint gonna stop!!
Cus I flow sick with this Hip Hop
Leave ah nigga at da drug deal still waitin for da drop!!
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Old 06-16-04, 12:32 PM   #2
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it was ok but ur structure needs a lil mo touching up u'll get betta ova time
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Old 06-16-04, 07:23 PM   #3
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mmr was u talkin bout me in that kill for fun verse????
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Old 06-16-04, 09:53 PM   #4
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it'z was kid play but needs 2 b touched up a lil bit ight
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Old 06-17-04, 05:01 AM   #5
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killed the verse.......not too bad
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Old 06-17-04, 09:35 AM   #6
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same as everybody else it jus needs some work here and there but not so bad at all......
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Old 06-17-04, 01:47 PM   #7
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needs work & work on ur style & structure so u can improve on ur technique
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