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06-27-04, 12:40 PM
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COME and LEARN... a keystyle presentation
IP: 6D0E 69D5
i'm bored... so just gonna key up some mad flavour...
I'm demonous... seemingly seamless I'm dreamin up... new ways to start beamin up... extraterristrial kids face it I bestin y'all with mad movement and motion... morose in depeche mode... makin sure the most know that Mag is The Dopeness __ alright the intro is done... speculate if you will bout to kick the ill one... introspective to spill fillin pen's with my blood insane in my veins.... dripping when I start a flow that puts em to shame kids say: what's the sonic news? magnificent abuse... I induce views of calibrated clues.... kneel next to pews pray to your saviour savour the flavour with tablets of paper confused knowledge craver? I'll get simplistic less mystic and rhyme in block format newspaper communion drops to the floor on the doormat we want the hardcore back yet don't realize where it went so theorize about lies until all you rhetoric is spent I'll sit back dispense common sense about ghetto communes and rock my spit on calm tunes sparking off the bomb truths... like we're a diseased and unpleased mass of upper, middle, lower trash class sitting in the back of a row of a million desks... and did you know that you weren't trying your best??? I did... cuz sweltering cities are filled with cheap whores who's asses are tapped more times than keyboards then ask for please more oh baby oh please more! I'm beggin for the S-T-D's transferred more than M-P-3s focused on slim shady LPs chokin it down cuz Em said 'Wheeze" Jeeeeeeezus Christ I'm tired of saying it twice... here's my last advice... If you don't fucking get this verse right go blow your brains out in the middle of the night! ~~~~FIN~~~~
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06-27-04, 01:36 PM
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IP: 6D0E 69D5
it's terrible that I get any sleep on this site... lol
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06-27-04, 01:46 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: DF7B C8F7
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^^^dope. Nice vocab and rhyming. I found it sort of boring just because it wasnt really a topic on anything, more of a self glorifying piece but no doubt it was good. I would like to see you do a deeper piece with the same calibre of the above.  |
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06-27-04, 01:50 PM
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IP: 005F B7E2
not bad but let me drop this one time up[ in here
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- WHAT HAPPENED TO DMX JUNE 6? Above the rim vexed like DMX cash in hand smash van At Kennedy Airport steal cars this reveal scars from the hood understand Go with lame impression after cocaine possession need a plan Charges several flagrant after impersonation of a federal agent Police with facts discreet found in the backseat a Billy Club Cop yelled “Silly Thug” are you a Rodney King dud?” DMX said “well can we just get along? I’m not a scrub” He was wearing a dew rag black holding a bag of crack Had a gun and that’s bad fun JACKIE HUDGINS Don’t Believe in tacky thugging both cats got me bugging He’ll need support in court on July twenty third his crew fly With plenty words |
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06-27-04, 02:47 PM
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IP: 6D0E 69D5
^^get your own thread...
btw that was wack....
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06-28-04, 04:00 PM
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IP: 3F52 D33F
uppp with three ps
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