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06-28-04, 10:31 PM
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I Thought I Lost You
IP: 635F 3B06
This is legendary on a few sites i've posted it on, so I figured i'd post it here to see where it goes. Note this piece is about 3 months old. I thought I lost you, So I let my heart fall through Shouldn't have.. but I led myself to believe it was my fault too I should have consulted you, but it didn't, now i'm the one to blame At night I scream your name, as my heart burns to a flame Life without you just aint the same, I need you I pleed you, to come back 1 last time, so I can see you I wish we wouldn't be through, is there anything I can do? As I drop to my knees and hands to, I'll do your every little command too Wow.. I didn't realize it, but your my heart and soul You make my life complete and full. You're what makes it whole Before I made some mistakes, that made our hearts break Please come back, I beg of you for our relationships sake Please just tell me this shits fake, and you didn't leave When you left me, the pain inside you just woudn't believe Your the love of my life, to me your a major loss to this universe In life to me, you are first. Compared to anything, losing you is worst But luckily, I didn't lose you, my conscience only went into play But now i'm happy, because my life you came back into today I'm happy as can be, that you're back with me..I love you I just want you to know, that there is no one, i would put above you See babe.. we're meant to be together, I can't live with out you It still breaks my heart to think about when, I thought i lost you
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06-28-04, 11:19 PM
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IP: 635F 3B06
Can I get some feedback in this..
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06-29-04, 12:00 AM
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IP: 635F 3B06
Delete This Freepost!
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06-29-04, 12:02 AM
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IP: B3D4 AD44
Whoops... damn AOL made me post to soon. Anyways, this should be put in legends. It was exquizit.
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06-29-04, 02:51 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: EC0B 84C7
this was nice man....quite emotional i wanted to cry....lol
naw but it was good i enjoyed reading it homie...structure was good and all....this was excellent
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07-01-04, 01:38 AM
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IP: 9A57 9A22
Ya'll some hoes.. theres ony been two replies
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07-01-04, 01:44 AM
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I see dumb people
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
that was some nice shit keepin it real i like that nice drop
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07-04-04, 08:43 PM
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IP: 2FC0 6C73
*shakes head* Relaunched = groupies
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07-04-04, 08:49 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: DF7B C8F7
this was ok. Vocab pretty basic and the emotion was ok...which sites is this a legendary piece on?
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07-05-04, 09:49 AM
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IP: 87DB 3669
Dont question me. And if you say Emotion was just "ok", you seriously need to learn how to read. This whole piece was emotional. And vocab isn't everything, pretty wack feedback that you give. Fuckin herb!
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07-05-04, 11:00 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: DF7B C8F7
what site was this legendary on?
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