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decent topical battle

L.E: i would have to say the thing that stood out the most in your verse was the imagery it started off about the characters and their surroundings and the happenings around them i enjoyed that...and then it escalated to a vision of the ring and you ran with the topic and i liked your approach a couple things could have been better : vocab and wordplay everything else was pretty solid and a very well written piece for a topic like this

poetic justice:

i felt your verse also i dont think the imagery was as good but the multies and wordplay were definaetly better...vocab was a lil better you came more complex but i didnt feel you stayed on topic as well as L.E did....you came from a different angle and point of view for this topic so it was hard to judge...i think your imagery could have been better and your structure...solid piece though

breakdown:

Consistency : limited edition
Flow : limited edition
Structure : limited edition
Wordplay : poetic justice
Multies: poetic justice
Imagery : limited edition
Vocabulary : poetic justice
Which topic i enjoyed more : poetic justice
Who staye on topic better : limited edition

vote: limited edition

Good topical battle tough decision but i think Limited Edition edged this one out because his imagery was slightly better

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ill up dis shit too... hot topical yall... very nice job poetic very nice.

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Limited Edition - Good verse. Stayed on topic all tha way through. Had some vocab. in there it was overall good story telling. The ending was strong it helped you alot in my eyes. Nice verse..........7.5/10

Poetic Justice - You had a decent ending but Limited's was better. However you had an edge over him cuz although he had vocab. you had more. You both had good lyrics as far as tha topic goes. So it was close. Overall good verse.....8/10

Vote: Poetic Justice.

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ok~ima vote in this cus i like to read topicals and i love lord of the rings..lol
L.E.~your verse was good, nice flow and vocab, i loved your opening lines and your closer, you set this up nice....tight verse
poetic~you had very good imagery in your vocab, you said a lot in every line, and your flow was great, you really new your character, which make sit that much better,and the words made it that much more powerful as well, i could picture this verse as i was reading it.........nice job fellas....
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this was personally a weak battle, the only good one was poetics...

L.E., i thought you could do better? well maybe now cuz dis battle is like 1 month old lol.. umm,

Score:
flow: 9/10, anyone can have a good flow really.
imagery:6/10 you really didn't have as much as good imagery, thats something you should really work on..
structure:9/10, anyone can have good structure.lol
emotion: 6/10, i really didn't feel any emotion in your verse, try putting more next time.
Vocab: 6/10now you must work on your vocab, you had alrite words, but just do better next time...
Total: 36/50

Poetic: damn man, alot of props to you, i've never seen your shyt before, but this was pretty damn good... And you used smeagal??haha, nyce move, i would of used that big guy sarran or w/e his name is lol, pretend im watching the ring the whole time ..but yea, damn ur shyt was good...

score:
Flow: 9/10 it flowed very nice man, good job..
Imgery: 8/10 Very nice imagery, haha, i could still see that moment in the movie theather as if i was there..
structure: 9/10 very nice structure..but neoen could have good structure>
Emotion: 6/10 It had okay emotion..not really alot.. but ur imagery made it like it didn't matter.
Vocab: 7/10, it had okay vocab..but still came up acoule times..so yea..pretty good..
Total: 39/50

vote: poetic

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