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THUGLIFEOUTLAW 2 28.57%
Mimesis 5 71.43%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 07-07-04, 02:38 AM   #1
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
Mimesis vs. THUGLIFEOUTLAW

IP: 6EB9 28C9

aight i called out...he accepted...

10 lines
no biting
no crew/hate votes
no feeding
u spit first
ill post after i see that uve posted

good luck...
 
Old 07-07-04, 02:39 AM   #2
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
IP: 6EB9 28C9

In.

try and post ur verse tonight or tomorrow...

i wanna get this shit closed soon...
 
Old 07-07-04, 03:16 AM   #3
UntouchableFlowz
Flyweight
 
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From: EastSide
IP: 6BF3 23D5

oh shit dont start on me im da greatest emcee dat u cant eva be/
i smash on motha fuckas dat like to try and smash on me/
ill start a feud like nas and jay-z but once i get done wit dis rap u wont see me/
cuz im always on da run im hot i cant be cot/
haters try to hate like u, u hate becuz u cant get pussy so u masterbate/
my rhymes r so hot dat u cant rate smartest emcee out ill have ur crew callin me da bill gates of dis rap game/
cuz once i get started i put ur lyrics to shame/
Now dat im done u will hear people sayin dat Mimesis's shit is lame/
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Old 07-07-04, 01:55 PM   #4
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
IP: 6EB9 28C9

lmao...y even try?...ill half ass this and still ko ur ass...

check it out...yo, yo...

you go around 'shootin' off at the mouth but your skills are all out dead
cause he needs attention so bad he does 'drive bys' in a callout thread!
ur wackness is gonna spread...ur just a no-name attemptin to be tight
cause he only typed his name like that...
...so he could finally have a CAPitol impact on the site!
man ur wack tonight...so i leave ya head sprayed wit ill, and left in a swirl
cause what kind of gangsta spends his 'rapperz' money on a fuckin playgirl!
i may hurl...u r shit is sickening...u just aint cuttin me, like usin a dull knife
and it only fits that ur crew is CRIPZ...
...cause we know u'll be a lyrical handicap ur whole life!
ima roll ur light...leave ya future in darkness...so dawg...dont even act big
and y should we value ur words?...ur shootin ur own damn words in ur sig!

Quit Pmin Me Sayin You Ripped Me...

Fuck You...
 
Old 07-07-04, 06:14 PM   #5
Black Pantha
Banned: Cheating
 
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From: DC (aka murda capitol) 501 boys
IP: 342F 2906

This was a good battle. Thuglife had it going in da beginnin but then he lost it towards da end. You need to stregnthen your punchlines and legnthen your lines. good try though.

Mimesis took this one cause his structure was da best. He had a nice flow to go wit it too. Your punchlines were good too but it got a little confusin and hard to read wit those extra lines but it was good.

Ok battle

v/Mimesis
 
Old 07-07-04, 07:15 PM   #6
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
vote 4 thuglifeoutlaw

IP: A49A 4FF0

this battle wasnt all that, the way mimesis was talking i thought he was j hove but he came out lame, and was is u people's definition of a fucking metaphor? cause everybody in rb swear they fucking rap critics but when i read u shit it be LAMe

and structure? STRUCTURE? what structure?!!
read this shit to a beat and tell me if it'll fit

this goes to thugout4life cause his shit is simple to read and it's to the point
 
Old 07-07-04, 08:58 PM   #7
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
IP: CF67 04C9

LMFAO @ hotshhs vote...ur just mad cause i voted against u faggot...

and structure and flow doesnt win battles, to the 2 people who have voted against me...

and in case there was any confusion...all of my punches were personals...

in his rapperz inventory he had a playgirl and in my open bitchslapped thread he was all, *drive -by*, poppin a cap or somethin like that....

but yall need to hop off of some dicks...seriously...
 
Old 07-07-04, 09:13 PM   #8
Mc:Xplicit
Hip-Hop Philosopher
 
From: north carolina
IP: 7090 A73B

man i think this was a little one sided in a way cause Mimesis had better personals and punches. But Thuglifeoutlaw had a nice structure but the personals win it over for me man.
Mimesis got this one
 
Old 07-07-04, 09:14 PM   #9
Mc:Xplicit
Hip-Hop Philosopher
 
From: north carolina
IP: 7090 A73B

ohh yea drop an honest vote here for me to man cuz we need some votes http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133732
 
Old 07-07-04, 09:17 PM   #10
Lethal Kahn
Flyweight
 
IP: C3D0 66BD

You fuckin' wack ass voters. Damn, I'd gladly merk all of you dumbasses that say "Read his shit and see if it flows to the beat". Omfg that's why it's called text you stupid dumbfucks.

Mimesis had much better punches that killed his opponent. Other dude came wack as fuck, meh, didn't like his verse at all.

And for you idiots, umm you can't take a written text and try to flow it to a beat you idiots. Coz each beat is different. You have to write to a beat. Not write without knowin' what the beat is.

Omfg stupid dumbfucks.

V/Mimesis
 
Old 07-07-04, 11:38 PM   #11
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
IP: 3ABE AF9D

werd @ flowin to a beat in TEXT...lmfao...

but anywho...

3-2 me...

UPPIN # 2 !!!!

leave a link and ill return the favor...
 
Old 07-08-04, 12:17 AM   #12
B.X.P
...UnBroken Perfection...
 
IP: 0F8A 7B91

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lethal Kahn
You fuckin' wack ass voters. Damn, I'd gladly merk all of you dumbasses that say "Read his shit and see if it flows to the beat". Omfg that's why it's called text you stupid dumbfucks.

Mimesis had much better punches that killed his opponent. Other dude came wack as fuck, meh, didn't like his verse at all.

And for you idiots, umm you can't take a written text and try to flow it to a beat you idiots. Coz each beat is different. You have to write to a beat. Not write without knowin' what the beat is.

Omfg stupid dumbfucks.

V/Mimesis



word^

shit this was one sided mimesis aka daedal(yes i know who you are)
had punches that destroyed thug..thug didnt have no punches at all well he did like 1 or 2 but it was played or whack as fuck...his whole verse was selfglorification or filler...man you need to diss the person not say that you was goin to kill him and shit...go to rb original and read vet battles to elavate

vote/mimesis for harder punches and better verse
 
Old 07-08-04, 01:14 AM   #13
INTRO
Banned: Cheating
 
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From: - BOSTON-
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thuglife u had a bad structure your punches didnt hit hard u barely had any no personal's no word play no vocab that was just wack


mimesis good wordplay some punches def hit harder than his some personal's decent structure vocab could have been betta though but u still beat him u had a good verse

structure mim
punches mim
vocab none but mim
personal's mim
word play mim
overall vote mim

word of advice tug elevate man
 
 


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