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5 | 71.43% |
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07-10-04, 06:26 PM
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you gotta hear me again
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IP: 1E3A CEDB
uppin i only need one vote. so now what you think unfortunate?
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07-10-04, 06:29 PM
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.....Death Awaits.....
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IP: 3240 794D
This was a close. but mediocre battle.
No hate. AKA Fix your structure. No more //'s and even up your lines. Your punches were in the right direction which is good. Now all you have to do is capitolize a little bit more. Your personals were also so-so. not good but they weren't bad. just re-word some things and you'll be fine. Unfortunate I've said this in quite a few battles. Your ryhme scheme is to predictable. I knew what word u were gonna ryhme wit before i read it. Also, your punches were jus a tad played an weak. No hate. Just some advice on what to strengthen up. very close but... Vote/AKA bothe elevate sum. Hit my battle's in my sig wit sum honest votes' thanks.
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