everybody doin sum love poems, so I thought I might as well write on too.....

I wish it was a dream, it's so much better to bear//
stuck emotionally, I wish I still had u here//
stolen from my tight grip, said, I never let u go//
time and I watched u slip, u drifted away so slow//
as the wind blows, a fragrance pose a fimilar flare to my nose//
to and fro, high and lo, I search, but ur no where close//
and even though, I have sumone new to kiss and hold//
at nights she wraps me tight and strong, but I still feel so cold//
no one feels this pain as I, its as if she's passed away//
I bow my head and cry in bed, and everynight I pray//
everyday it seems in vain, I know not fo wat I fight//
lost and away, my ex-fiance, I lost half of my life//

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Lyrical Rapsody

DAMN Kidd dat was nice...real damn emotional on that...really feelin it...keep that shyt up iight peace

it was aight structure was off though fix that

pc bez

nice poem keep up the good job

good job