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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
ibraheem | 1 | 16.67% | |
sporadic | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-22-04, 01:42 PM | #16 | |
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Sporadic: Spordaics verse was much more in depth.. very well written... could picture your self in his shoes in tha story....had more details and still flowed well.... very nice..
[i]inbraheem:[I] Inbraheem also had an ok verse but wasnt as good as spor'z....tho inbra flowed nice in some parts spor took it for the way he wrote it..... all in all spor got this.. V- Spor |
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07-23-04, 12:17 AM | #17 | |
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i like sporadics flow a lil better
i felt wut both of u were sayin but i felt sporadics a lil more so he got my vote |
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07-23-04, 12:20 AM | #18 | |
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IP: EC0B 84C7
oh ye almost 4got
vote 4 deez battles amayze vs 2hard2lose http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 murda-gram http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 forgotten flow http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 novakane http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749 peace |
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07-23-04, 06:50 AM | #19 | |
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IP: 94CF 2D6F
AMAYZE i would'v returned the favor if you had a better explained vote there is much than feeling the verse that you can talk about
with respect upping peace |
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07-23-04, 08:43 AM | #20 | |
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IP: 6D2D 421B
upping this theard..some more explained votes plzzz
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07-23-04, 12:54 PM | #21 | |
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IP: 6D2D 421B
upping this theard i will return the vote into ur battles pz
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Sporadic is BETTER than BigChase Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase Rapverse= No show Bigchase Now Tell me whos better? |
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07-23-04, 05:46 PM | #22 | |
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IP: 94CF 2D6F
vote and leave a line and i will hit you back on your battles
upping |
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07-23-04, 09:07 PM | #23 | |
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IP: 94CF 2D6F
vote and leave a link and i will hit you back on your battles
upping |
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07-24-04, 08:11 AM | #24 |
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wow nice battle guys........
ok sporadic = your structure to start with was great, really made it easy for the reader to get it, also the flow helped this as well and was nearly perfect....dont think you fell off at any part in the piece!! rite now the writers voice for me is the most important part of a topical battle and you potrayed it in a way that made me stay glued to my screen...you described the actions and emotion great!! vocab was there, nicely worded!! really good piece man!! Fav part = i take the dive memories flash past as i plunge to my death last words to my loved ones with a whisper "i love you" ..with my very last breath ^^ great last line Ibraheem = also wow, your structure was different to sporadics, but still near perfect, and your flow WAS perfect....you couldnt of got it better if you tryed. ok your writers voice came out nice, the way you blamed the goverment and showed that Bust and bin laden aint that different!! i liked the contrast!! didnt think you had as much emotion as sporadic but still real nice!! Fave line = I got an idea that I would like you to join/ Thinking GW Bush and binladin 2 different faces of the same coin/ ^^ good contrast So really nice topical battle both of you, but i think i'm going with sporadic, just on the fact that he explained a like jorney instead of writing facts!! but both of you props!! Vote Sporadic HIT UP MY POEM........... WHITE DOVE - MY PRAYER PZ |
07-24-04, 11:02 AM | #25 | |
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IP: 6D2D 421B
finish it!!!!....want to get up to 5 wins so i get out ov this herb infested front lines
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Sporadic is BETTER than BigChase Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase Rapverse= No show Bigchase Now Tell me whos better? |
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07-24-04, 12:59 PM | #26 | |
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IP: 94CF 2D6F
vote and leave a link and i will hit you back on your battles
upping |
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07-25-04, 12:45 AM | #27 | |
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IP: 94CF 2D6F
need some votes leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
upping |
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07-25-04, 10:58 AM | #28 | |
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IP: 94CF 2D6F
need some votes leave a link i will hit you back on your battles with an honest vote
upping |
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07-25-04, 01:10 PM | #29 | |
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IP: 6D2D 421B
upping da theard...finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sporadic is BETTER than BigChase Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase Rapverse= No show Bigchase Now Tell me whos better? |
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07-25-04, 01:25 PM | #30 | |
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IP: EC0B 84C7
yo im a have to go wit ibraheem, shit wat he said was real that i could feel, he did stick yo the topic, like sparadic but went different ways in goin about it
sparadic took me on a journey, a little more wordplay would of had the audience attention vote ibraheem good topic also, that shitts serious aight ni99as 1
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