yo da vinchi bitch ima put ur verse here ya heard 1

Da vinchi verse:

was up then bitch new mane
I can't tell who you are, but I can pull your face out of a crowd
I'll crush you on the regular like Def Jam did to Loud
'll smack your bitch up because I'm gangsta like that
You're washed up like you just visited a laundromat
I'll leave you debating whether to pursue a rap career
You can swallow my punchlines, but they'll give you diarhea
Not a carnival, but I'll leave you spinning like the ferris wheel
If that's your way of coming hard, then I'm coming like the man of steel
listen to ya self ya sound gay
in there probably jackin off to posters of b2k
put 6 in ya chest
give u a chance to live hell naw get put to rest

iiight bitch here i go

Lyrics off the top a my-dome, step over this foot high-gmome, Takin over "da vinchi"/
I'll Send this guy-"home" to "improve" his ryhme-form, then change his name to "Bob the stinkie"// (Bob fini)

I don't don't need to outspit the way-I "outsmart" this gay-guy, like computer "A.I."/
Then call me "Speilberg" as I "direct" your stray-minds to this fag getting thrown to the wayside//(Speilberg directed A.I.)

Your ryhmes lack potential to-win, Facin this "God", You don't know what you're doin/
Your odds are exponential, "True-sin" manifested , you can't see the trouble you-in//(True sin = Murder, murder is a sin)

killa is goin to grab a hold-of-your-spine, remove it, to leave a hole-in-your-mind/
Fill it with that smooth flowing-of-mine, then I'll be sure that you're Knowing-my-ryhmes//

You sit alone everynight without-a-date. You couldn't get "pussy" with a "cat" and a book on how-to-rape/
In this rap board community you're not "in" the "loop", So I can say you're "out of shape"//

I think I know what you're problem-is, I'm gonna take you're life and abolish-this/
My lyrics swallow you till I gotta-piss, and leave you falling down a pit that's bottomless//(my lyrics are endless)

"Da stinkie", your lyrics leave me "boRD", You gonna comeback with something stored/
Probably heard this before, but you couldn't win this "vote" if my name was "Al Gore"//

Did you think I would go easy on you, dumb-ass? Thought I might cut you some-slack?/
Nah, I'm gonna bend you into a "boomerang", throw you, and you still won't "comeback"//


I know the flow was a off, but I gave it my all to this fuckin idiot\
UUUUP in votes

i think im man enough to put up my own verse
do that again you'll end up in a hurse
homie take a seat
ya need to start ridin a dick instead of tryin to ride a beat m
your an easy target
ya like a hoe man your always on the market
listen to me bitch
pussy move ya did
like game said only guy pushin rock in jersey is jason kidd
fuck wat ya said
you could fia back then end up dead
but right now im toooo busy ya know ya mom gives good head
its dun bitch ya wack you dont have no punchlines fake gansta
next time ya need to come harder its ya boy da vinchi vote me

come on man vote me i took him no dick rydaz no crew helpers if u are in one thats a bitch made nigga move holla back

uppin me manne its da vinchi new kid on tha block wit some fia first battle eva and i ripped him
lets go holla back

iight bitch ima go one more time then thas it sucka then we go on votes!!!

Alright, here it is -
Yo,

I purposly waited to post just to build suspense//
After this verse we'll have to talk about vinchi in past tense//1
In your defense i realize you were born spitting nonsense//
You stink so bad your sig should be purple haze insence//2
If i gave you a pointy hat you could be a keebler elf//
You woke up, looked in the mirror, and laughed at your self//3
Its ironic this faggots name is da vinchi//
They call me killa and hes not even 1/4 as good as me//4
You think you're Superman so ill turn you to Christopher Reeves//
Guys help you out so they can get you on your knees//5
Shooting you twice is the only way you'll see 2 rounds//
I listened to your audio and heard gay porn in the background//6
Ill melt you down like ice in an oven//
Dont get mad at me cus you got your cherry eaten//7
Ill use flame to imprint my name in your head like a blacksmith//
Your like a blind porn star, you dont know who your fuckin with//8

Thats that. I dont even need to go a full 10 on this bitch. 1 up in votes

vote me hollabak his rhymes are korny hes a cornball dont vote for him or i meann she its ya boy whats really good strait from that baseline 4k

u so gay u not a she u idiot shut up and let the people decide if u won or i won

you both fuckin suck ass, both tryin to sway, too many verses....a mod should be notified of this whack ass battle

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Wat the fcuk. Why yall got two verses. Stupidass newbies. Imma just base this on the first verse. Killa skillz takes it with better punches and some ok multies. Lines kinda stretched, but the verse was still koo. Da vinci, you gotta elevate badly man. Your shit had me wantin ta go ta sleep and was played out with the weak punches. Killa takes tha win.

Vote-Killa

Vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136785

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ew yo people up in votes come on i need 4 more to win

lol... ok...

Killa- Your First Verse Was Better Than The Other 3 In The Whole Battle.... Stick To Your First Style It Works My Effectivly. Punches Were Eh, You Had Some Wordplay, Some Metaz... Stucture In Your Second Verse Was Good.. N You Dont Need To "Highlight" Or [b]Bold[/i] Your Punches And Wordplay, Doesnt Make It Better Jus Harder To Read... Anyway Overal Ok First Verse... Second Verse Sucked

Da Vinchi- Needa Up Ya Game.. And Elavate... Structure Was Bad And Punches Didnt Hit... Flow Was Eh.. Could Use Some Work There Too..... Try To Fucos On Makeing Harder Punches In Your Next Battle... Overal Not To Good On Either Verse....

V-'- Killa Skillz.. Overal Better Verses Than Da Vinchi...

Return Favor With Honest Vote'....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169

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dem ive been waiting for some 1 else to judge the battle and nobody votes!!