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Old 07-25-04, 08:10 AM   #16
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if you guys actually sitll have your first verses........................................ROFL MFAO!.. lmao..
my first rap was about a roach named billy.. he was my pet ..he died.. wrote it in 1st grade:


my best friend..roachy/
he broky'd/
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Old 07-25-04, 10:25 AM   #17
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masterpiece ... ^
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Old 07-25-04, 11:01 AM   #18
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These people are crazy.
They really dont phase me.
They just act like a bunch of babies.
Its ignorant, yea i know.
Thats just how people are anymo'.
I aint the one goin around screamin fuck the world.
I guess that's just way to act boys and girls.
You aint even half a man.
Now im sittin back laughin.
I dont know what you have labeled me as but personally i dont give a fuck.
I just step back and holler fuck um'.
I wait for the fucka to step with somethin cuz i aint fearin nothin
And never gettin down to my knees and beggin pleaz.
HELL NAW.Clockin G's with power,money and pistols,
Clockin them for when they come and get you.
Perfection is what i seek.
That is my ambition but i still haven't reached this mountain peak.
But no matter what you still hear me shoutin, talkin shit.
I am sick of people,i dont wanna earl,
It's just me against the world.

that was my first shit.....shame aint it? i thought i was the shit too....i thought no one was better and i look at it now and am like i sucked....lol i know i had my 1st before this but this was closest to it....the first started

When you look into my eyez you get hypnitized
You realize that i aint a perfect guy
Aint a goodie goodie two shoes
Don't believe me, i'll show you fools
I'm like a kite, i never go down without a fight
I float simular to a boat
Never knowin what kind of guns i tote

and a whole bunch more bull shit....thought i was the shit.....but atleast i elevated alot from then
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Old 07-25-04, 11:12 AM   #19
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calam, im feelin ya on roachy... in 2nd grade i had a pet ant... ... i ate it.. ...
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Old 07-25-04, 11:23 AM   #20
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fuck i cant even remember my first battle, i was pillin...
i remember i did alrite tho..
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Old 07-25-04, 01:26 PM   #21
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damn i wish i had my first spits written down somewhere--- i lost all my notebooks from highschool-- heres the verse to the first shit I ever recorded-- then had the tape eat it in the car later on---

It's a Massacre- Grab the Mic Chord and Strangle-Ya/
Amatuer Swordsmen- Get Caught up by this Marksmen/
Darts-Spin off Finger-Tips-- Hit Ya Carcus/
Corpses Lost in Darkness- Kill The Heartless/
And Ill Artist- Who Eats Opponents Regardless/
Terminate Ya Fate- Gamble? Odds is Im the Largest/
ENERGY- Kinetic Melodies-
Kill Thine Enemies- Sick Minded Tendencies,
Who's Testin Me?- Stickin Sharp Objects in Ya Chest where a Vest- Should be/
Wild Child- Fire All Weaponry-
I got the Illest Arsenal Possible- Stomping You- Knockin kids out Just like Apollo-Do/


lmao- and I can't believe I still have that shit memorized.
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Old 07-25-04, 02:26 PM   #22
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Quote:
Originally Posted by calamity
if you guys actually sitll have your first verses........................................ROFL MFAO!.. lmao..
my first rap was about a roach named billy.. he was my pet ..he died.. wrote it in 1st grade:


my best friend..roachy/
he broky'd/


Yep, even though I went to battle stats, searched myt name, and found my first battle. I have no life at all.

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Old 07-25-04, 02:59 PM   #23
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Good lookin' out Forsaken, Flow Intelligent, and One Man Band! I wrote that shyt like ...well it was a long ass time ago!!! My peoples still like that shyt for some reason. I'll just say that it's at least 10 years old. Hey man... whenever anybody wanna do a collabo or sum'n I'm down with that!

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Old 07-25-04, 03:01 PM   #24
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Yo OMB, who da kid in the Brooklyn shirt? He kinda look familiar for some reason. (I'm originally from the spot he reppin on his shirt!)
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Old 07-26-04, 03:26 PM   #25
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my first was so sorry i aint even gonna spit it, but it was about playin basketball.
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Old 07-26-04, 05:33 PM   #26
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nah thats just a friend of mine that gets me instrumentals n makes beats.. and nah he hails from SD... but hes wearin brook wear..lol
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Old 07-26-04, 06:08 PM   #27
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my first rap on thi board was vs. XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

yo here i go

you think you rappin material//you sound like you read yo rhymes off tha back of a boxo cereal//i aint here ta fool around//im here ta make sure dis battle dont turn around//when da dawgfatha grabs tha mike you might as well go ramble//cause when i rock that mike i rock it unobjectionable//you might want to grab a dictionary for tha words i impose//when i leave you 6 feet deep i wont need to be poised//dolja at my side and my buds in tha corna//ta make sure ya dont botha//i dont got no krew//i dont have to//jus 100% real hardcore//bitches underrated me before//now they get kicked out tha door//yo dont waste my time i got things to do//i leave you now im celebratin 4-20 without you//so take yo leave or make a cumback foo
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Old 07-26-04, 06:24 PM   #28
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E-yo, I'ma newbie on this site but I got vets challengin' me
It must be my karma, but no worries, I'll merk this guy, see
This guy doesn't really understand the true essence of rappin'
Sorry dog, u have no future in rhymes, but u got talent in actin'
Cause you sign on to Rap Battles actin' like your ass is real hard
I'm a basketball man, not football, but even I can punt ur ass far
Normally, I would spare this wack shit the pain of badly losin'
But I'm in a bad mood, so I'll fuckin' merk those of my choosin'
Deep down he wants to shock the world, but all he can pick up is static
Right now I ain't even thinkin', merkin' this muthafucka is automatic
I can understand your reasoning by wantin' to battle every newbie
Cowardice, but battlin' me? You might as well scream "school me"
Why are you even on this site? Your only interest is basketball
I can't really understand why this wack shit is in rankings so tall
But that's the way the cookie crumbles, I'll just have to eliminate
I got about as much respect for u that from heaven on u I'll ejaculate
I have fighting talent, enough to do lyrical surgery on you, my Brethren
Here comes thy father, time to perplex ur mind, better go grab ur Excedrin.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114810
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Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
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Old 07-26-04, 06:28 PM   #29
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I posted this in Open Mic, first drop on RB


Its the return of that nigga wit rhymes, lines like broken glass tear apart your limbs from your spritual mind. Light'n em Up from my tongue like T.N.T. and guns, words come'n off amaze'n, ingulf'n niggas in flame's...n...ways you can die is left up to the mic that I hold in my left and the pen in my right. When I write, words flow and give life to my verse, for these incupedent souls that were lost at birth. Some didnt know who the prophet was, until they heard that this young boy who spoke gave birth to words. Cause I was sent to unleash rath and bring straight pain, to these known wash-ups for this new rap game...

Cause I was sent to unleash rath and bring straight pain to these known wash-ups for this new rap game. Light'n em Up from the top to the bottom of this page, Given them more of my words till they blow away...

Yo, how much shit does it take, to get your name at the top of my hit list, just keep off my dick. Believe nigga I'm a ride, wit my crew by side. Blast ya head on the paper, read The Star through your eyes. The next page brings a whole new chapter, the climax and the end for these so-called rappers. The Deuce, is what you here when they call me on the speaker. The "G" for the first, Guetto Grim Reaper. My shit gets deeper, as these lines go, and flow from the mind of invulnerable soul. Lett'n know, whos the slayer of men and drag bodies like ice to the desructable cold. Bury them, that stand in the way of a well known killa, like a model, i eat rhymes just to keep my figure.

Cause I was sent to unleash rath and bring straight pain to these known wash-ups for this new rap game. Light'n em Up from the top to the bottom of this page, Given them more of my words till they blow away...
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Old 07-26-04, 06:29 PM   #30
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Yo, Your The Only Butcha I Know That Aint Got A Meat Cleaver, And Your
Ass Is So Pussy Ill Call You Mr. Beaver,
See I Put Bone In Your Girlfriends Mouth And Made Her My Golden Retriever
See I Know You Used To Love Hip Hop, But She Had To Leave Ya
Cuz Your A Fake Ass Punk And That Shit Aint Debatable, Plus The Only Bitches You Get Are The Ones That Are Inflatable
See Vango Is A Freestyle Champ Kid And Thats No Mystery, See Butcha Your Out Like February, Black Your Ass Is History!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

See Ya Beaaaacchhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!
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