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07-30-04, 11:39 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5C53 9EAB
uppppppppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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07-30-04, 11:46 PM
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This was feedback posted for phatinum
IP: 59B3 099F
phatinum first line looks like a quote from big l- just re worded
Big L's Line- " You Betta Fleep Hops, Or Ya Head Gets Flown 3 Blocks" - Big L - Dont Front First Line And " Its The Tripple 6 In This Shit, Im From H-e Double Hockie Sticks, Im The Son Of the Devil Like My Song Said, Break Niggas Like Corn Bread, You Cant Kill Me I Was Born Dead" - Same Song Just A Little Bit More Into It And Phats First Line Went "U better flee bitch before ya head gets a 3 stitch Ill burry you in my shed you cant kill me I was born dead " <- Just Something To Think About....
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07-31-04, 06:46 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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07-31-04, 06:56 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
Voted For: For$akeN
forsaken took this no comp.. phat ya verse had no structure or flow... and it wasnt a battle verse.. forsaken takes this.. although his verse was pretty weak too.. but it had flow n structure AND most of all... punches... so... v/ forsaken... and btw, could you return the favor on me vs eye in my sig.. one
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07-31-04, 06:56 PM
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<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 9088 AED1
Voted For: For$akeN
aight not much comp here,flow punches,structure,vocab,all go ta verse 2,pretty weak battle but an easy decision phat you gotta elevate alot before ya battle anymore dawg..i think you should go read da tutorial n practice..forsaken i thought your opener was your best bar...
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07-31-04, 06:57 PM
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<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 9088 AED1
return da vote:http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138655
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07-31-04, 11:23 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-01-04, 03:40 AM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
yall know you sleeping on dis weak ass battle.......................... get it over with already getting bored as fuck.........................
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08-01-04, 08:29 AM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 07C8 9C8D
Voted For: For$akeN
fORSAKEN TOOK THIS BATTLE FOR BEETTER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS, HIS LINES WERE STRCTURED WELL AND HIS FLOW WAS GOOD.. AGIN PHATINUM DOESN'T STRUCTURE HIS LINES AND HE IS LOSING POINTS FROM THAT. vOTE/FORSAKEN PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR BY VOTEING ON MY BATTLE HERE IS THE LINK http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1452658
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