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lyricalflowz23 |
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5 | 55.56% |
MARVOLoUsJ1009 |
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4 | 44.44% |
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IP: 596D 3521
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
aight this battle was ok but i think marv edged it Marv...u haad sum gud wordplay and ur personals wus aight but the flo was off ....on sum parts....ur structure i liked....overall id say about a 7/10 lyrical...ur verse was smooth but i didnt think u tried but anyways u had sum gud wordplay...ur vocab was aight and personals was ok didnt really like em though overall it was jus decent or 6.8/10 Vote=marv yo go hit this battle up between me and dragon heres the link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 |
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: lyricalflowz23
Lyrical gets my vote...he had harder punches than MARV..his structure was in place..and tha flow was good too..tha vocab was good and easy to read... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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This was feedback posted for MARVOLoUsJ1009
IP: E198 D20B
not voting, i just wanna see the battle score and responses..
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IP: 838F 2E38
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Ill do this by lines i like. Marv get W's off dr's but watch me put a spark 2 ya fans,u garbage & fam! do ya self a favor step up ya "game boy" cuzz u real far from "advanced" u not fukkin with me im lyrically gifted i merk folks,u win off of jerk votes.. u only battle dudes with da title unda they sreen name "this is my first post" ya audio's should be trash cuzz u aint even nice at dis u gota average text think im soft? well u "dont know who u fukkin w/" like da "blind ppl haven sex" but tell ya moms prick,how u a undercover fag dat be on dick u like men w/ "giant" balls & a guy name "barry" is who u "bond" with The "this is my first post" one was hot, liked that, and the rest were good punches... lyricalflowz23(please change this name, lol) I have winstreaks longer than your moms, and your sisters hair combined, you couldn't have a pretty verse, if you had it customly designed, That was the only line I was feelin in that..most of them are played punches ppl used on him, the "elevate with a elevator" line was wack as hell, c'mon dog...and yall had the same Booty Thread concept...gay....but anyway v/Marv for better punches in his verse.
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IP: 0D28 B715
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
marv hasd better personals n not so played punches i've seen alot of variations of most of these punches but ya'll put them together fairly nice,marv got the originality for good punches, lf23 you punches were aight but severly played out.....your finisher could've been better to...i found it simple with not alot of punch...not much in your verse connected..... but decent battle overall......i was jus feeling marvs more....
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IP: 7C6F 690C
Voted For: lyricalflowz23
lyricalflow cuz he had more persnals and harder punches... flow and structure were good too... Marv you had strong punches and good structure an d flow but lyrical had more personals and thats why he got my vote... v/LuricalFlow23
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CC22 8E2E
I don't know whats up but i can't vote..... otherwise i would give it to Lyrical, hmmm, you guys both had sic personels, I love personels, but I think Lyricalflowz just came at you harder wit them, and his punches hit like mad, J you was str8, sic verse, I was like mad feelin it in some ryhmes and then wasn't really in to it in others, you had more meta's both of you had some sic wordplay, it was hella close battle, but lyrical owned the multis, and his flow was tight, J was to but it was just a little lacking, Lyrical man you gotta use hyperlinks it makes your structure better, either way, it was still good structure, a little better then J's, opener was a definate tie, but the closing has to go to Lyrical, fo real tho honest, no h8, i'm a good judge, pz
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CC22 8E2E
Take it to strobe cuz this sude be a win if i could vote..... unless i dont got enough posts, that would just be wack
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Still Sick
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IP: 3912 B131
Voted For: lyricalflowz23
This battle was so fuckin wack! both of yall niggas are straight garbage. Lyricalflows came less garbage. Marv, just came completly horrible, I mean.. ya audio's should be trash cuzz u aint even nice at dis u gota average text think im soft? well u "dont know who u fukkin w/" like da "blind ppl haven sex ^wtf was that shit? that was some of the most wackest waskiest wacky wack wack shit I ever seen, and you prolly thought that shit was dope when you typed it too, didnt you? I GOT NEWS FOR YOU! IT WASNT DOPE! you aint even worth my time, im done with this cat, ENOUGH SAID, now that im done "exposing" ur "ass" it now belongs in the "Booty Thread" ^That shit was ultimate trash too, but atleast it had some sort of wittiness. or some shit, yall niggas are wack and yalls punchlines are so fuckin basic. like I said before, v/lyrical, for being less wack and a wack ass battle.
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