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08-20-04, 09:30 PM | #1 | |||||||
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My Bussiness
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whats wronge with ur life, y u got to mess with mine
don't keep worryin about what i do, i'm going be just fine if i want to get drunk and have a good time and then i get in a fight, do a bad crime ur not my father, not my dad not ur chocie to punish me when i'm bad y can't u just get the fuckin point go sit down and roll a joint just want u always told me i'm going be iight y can't u see if i want help i'll ran to u so from now on don't sweat what i do when i'm in trouble with the law don't worry i'll still stand tall shove ur lecture up ur ass tried of hearin it, fuck i'll pass so keep ur nose when it belong don't even tell me when i'm wrong
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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08-20-04, 10:49 PM | #2 | |||||
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wow, emotional piece gurl, i liked it a lot, i liked the "shove ya lecture up ya ass" line, word, i wonder if this is goin on in ya life, im sorry bout that, but i liked this drop a lot, very vivid, keep it up gurl............holla
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08-22-04, 12:19 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 66EA F6BA
yeah K this is nice i agree with fluidmoon.... i kno its wut ur goin threw and how hard it is but i've known u since i was 2 and u'll always make it threw
love ya like my sis |
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08-22-04, 02:23 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Flowed, but possibly came too cliche with this. Was emotional, but if you match that emotion with more creativity the effect is much, MUCH greater. Keep working on it.
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08-22-04, 05:11 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 95EB 880F
feel'n the emotion, thats what matters , good writing, feelin all of it and you know jus keep up wut u doin
o yea join da crew we could use ya http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143986 |
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08-24-04, 08:59 PM | #6 | |||||||
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i still love u
IP: B41A A5BC
u was the only one for me u was the love of my dreams and baby i love u so much i whould do enythin for u baby come back to me love nathan
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ya my name is M.C DUCK AND IF U WHATTO BATTLE I AM CALLING U OUT U GOT IT HAHAHA YES I AM A BOY IF U WHATED TO KNOW LOL IF LOL IT IS NOT FUNNY OK AND I GOT ONE GIRL THAT IS ALL I NEED I AINT ON PLAYER OK AND IF U GOT SOMETHING TO SAY THEN SAY IT GOT IT JUST PM ME I NEED SOMEONE TO TALK TO OK |
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08-24-04, 09:23 PM | #7 | |||||||
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yeah K im sure he does he said that last time
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08-24-04, 11:44 PM | #8 | ||||
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this was a nice and emotinal piece it was very interesting to read on.. and i really like the piece.. nice job
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08-25-04, 02:34 AM | #9 | ||||
Back In Business
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I feel ya pain, yo... and I agree... a little more creativity matching the emotion and it would be a sick drop... ya started off really good and then ya ideas started getting smaller... emotion was still there but the "picture" was starting to get a little blurry if ya know what i mean... nice though... keep at it... also... check my drop called That's All I Can Stand.... I Can't Stands No More"... it's in the same frame of emotion as your piece... lemme know what you think...one
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08-25-04, 08:01 AM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 80E9 05F4
Quote:
On relationship advice (usually depending on maturity level/the manner in which the relationship ended) , ex mates tend to just love when they see their ex-sweethearts experiencing pain and even going as far as expressing it. Always know that everything happens for a reason and listen, it is much better to get out of something that is not real a few months or even a few years after it starts.. it could have been 10 years of an illusion, 10 years of misery (for both of you) and of course once familiariality sets in, it is harder and harder to break away. So.. Continue to grow as a woman, as an artist.. and then you will be better able to use your craft to help other people to grow as well.
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08-26-04, 04:34 PM | #11 | |||||||
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to badgurl
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i never lived before your love i never fell before your touch i never needed anyone to make me feel alive but then again i wasnt really liveing i never lived before your love i wanted more than just an ordinary life all my dreams seemed like castles in the sky i stand before you and my heart is in your hands and i dont know how i survied without your kiss casue your giveing me a reason to exist couldnt we give it just one more try? i thought that we would last forever but now youre gone and i thank i know why i guess i should have said i am sorry maybe things wouldnt be this way heaven knows i love u baby and if u love me baby come back to me and all the times i made u cry im sorry dont say goodbye i wish i had this chance to love u one more time!!!!!(baby come back to me)??????
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ya my name is M.C DUCK AND IF U WHATTO BATTLE I AM CALLING U OUT U GOT IT HAHAHA YES I AM A BOY IF U WHATED TO KNOW LOL IF LOL IT IS NOT FUNNY OK AND I GOT ONE GIRL THAT IS ALL I NEED I AINT ON PLAYER OK AND IF U GOT SOMETHING TO SAY THEN SAY IT GOT IT JUST PM ME I NEED SOMEONE TO TALK TO OK |
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08-29-04, 09:13 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 3CB0 FA3B
damn dawg leave me be plzz! I don't want ur ass back sry!
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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