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Old 07-03-02, 09:50 AM   #1
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If yall only knew how bad it feels
You couldn't continue to show this
Pain and suffering emotions killed
Let out flames from a heart of anguish
See the fire run through my veins
Hear the torturing sounds
Lists of solutions where nothings gained
I can watch my life go down
Down that path of terror and fright
Not knowing what can have its way
Sensing a sprit so dark at night
Winning the battle of the heart that paid
The enviroment has settled down now
And I become a child of God
For I was lost and now Im found
Having relations growing fond...

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Old 07-03-02, 09:56 AM   #2
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yo that was a good flow nice piece
what did you just get saved or something
yo Iam mixed up is it a religious piece or just a flow of emotions.1
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Old 07-03-02, 10:02 AM   #3
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its kinda both... and naw ive been saved but i go into others thoughts and crap. thanks for postin
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Old 07-05-02, 10:27 PM   #4
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hey dude, ur back... ne way, nice peice, i liked this one alot... the flow was awesome, the vocab was good, and the emotions were raw and thouro... fave lines:

See the fire run through my veins
Hear the torturing sounds
Lists of solutions where nothings gained
I can watch my life go down

nice peice again... keep it flowin
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Old 07-05-02, 10:41 PM   #5
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yo son ur shyt wass poppn. flow was weak. but keep postin. uno
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Old 07-06-02, 08:48 AM   #6
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good piece...just solid all the way through....short yet so well put....respect....
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